on Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer
12 Jan 2003, 8:03 AM
Hehehe. That was funny. I hope more People get to read this.
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
8 Mar 2003, 7:45 PM
heh. Nice.8
on some deleted poem
19 Jan 2003, 11:48 PM
nice. check out my response to you on my poem. well I don't rate stuff that strikes close to home...
on Fetish Section by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 1:56 PM
hahaha I wish I were 18....
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
21 Mar 2003, 9:14 PM
hey it's good to see something from you. Your last post was in feb. Yet some how you have captured my ultimate night mare.
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 5:21 PM
Is this possibly about the catholic church? Well actually I saw your name else where and was wondering if you know that this is one of the most waesome pieces ever written? I personally think that you have talent. Find yourself a good 'play' though
on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
29 Jan 2003, 6:17 PM
Well this does show moderate talent. We all know that you are capable of far more superior works...It provided something else for me to think about. ThX, Ranger.
l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality
l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality
on Something ot other by Myte342
13 Jan 2003, 6:30 PM
Vous ??tes un kurd bizarre d'haricot. Oh les amusement d'un dictionnaire..
zactly. To the point. Wel written. Up above though? I still believe in it and have faith, but no devotion. Hey Check out may I still my heart or something like that. I think that we both write love well. And many ppl do speak of you. That is one of the first positive things that darky has said. She jests at ppl that are a threat to her. Prepare she will try to twist the blade in your back.
on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
9 Mar 2003, 9:15 AM
Hey look I liked it and gave it the 10. I was mearly saying that pain is not as great when you live in anger. Anger leaves less room for pain.
on Drunk Satan by smlink84
8 Mar 2003, 7:51 PM
ummmmm...sure. Ehat ever you say
*backs away instinctively
you sir have NO method to YOUR madness
*backs away instinctively
you sir have NO method to YOUR madness
on Thorns of Grace by smlink84
8 Mar 2003, 7:46 PM
You seem to be a strong person. Some day we learn. Some day we yern. Yet we shall never accept what can be percieved as the only truth.
on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:33 PM
Hehehe. This seems to be a story that repeats itself in adolescence...Get laid.
well actually here go off on rage it might help
Get bent
Eat Shit
Fuck off
Go rot
well actually here go off on rage it might help
Get bent
Eat Shit
Fuck off
Go rot
on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:31 PM
Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this
on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:27 PM
I can stand the thought of mine being with another girl... I want him to. We each wasted such a valuable time of our lives. Stop crying. I mean, it won't help. Once you figure out what you want then you can cry. Just keep looking. Stop focusing on one person
on Heartbreaker by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:21 PM
yeah man. I know what you mean by it. Yet think. Love just isn't worth it. Well maybe in your case lust....hey what would a paid whore know? Just kidding. But a paid whore would know. I mean they make their living on not loving.
on Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous
3 Mar 2003, 7:43 PM
Nice. Then you must know what it is to feel that you search and seek to destroy. That you alone are responsible for certain...things.
on Stolen Away by Carvaceous
3 Mar 2003, 7:40 PM
Tsk Tsk Tsk. We are too young too love. Too foolish to consider unrequitted feelings. Too young...I'll be your shoulder to cry on in your time of woe.. I only know because I've been through a love so tortorous that I didn't know if I could stand to look in his eyes with out knowing that he'd be ok. That he'd live. Then as I say...Then She Got Over It the title of a new poem. You'll learn and eventually...Hey here's a thought, maybe you were just looking for validation...Try to feel better and get sleep.
on Peacock Fight by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 1:55 PM
well that's anending thaty certainly explains many things....