on contradiction and contrast by Freethinker1602
12 Oct 2003, 12:44 PM
it's best not to talk to one's self while writing or soemthing like this comes up
on HE FUCKING BIT ME(a some what true story) by Lucifer
7 Jul 2003, 11:56 PM
;)
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 12:08 AM
I'm the same as JLVM this is instantly sobering you have a true gift of word.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 5:36 PM
I've had writers block for a bit(go figure) and my friend asked me to write some lyrics to her songs. I was writing it when my step mom came in. so I put it up with out finishing it...help!
on Ash Wednesday by Dreamer
17 Aug 2003, 1:57 PM
has a sonorous ring to it...a bit familiar in some way. not to shabby, 7
on some deleted poem
5 Aug 2003, 4:46 AM
welcome to poem ranker, though it is a pimple poem, it still has beauty and melodic ring.
on some deleted poem
2 Aug 2003, 2:22 AM
fucking tight...best I've read
on some deleted poem
2 Aug 2003, 2:24 AM
I like cigarettes
on some deleted poem
2 Aug 2003, 2:26 AM
lay off the lesbian shit!!! 0
on A comment for Me (Aj) from a hottie by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
21 Jul 2003, 4:35 PM
WEll you know what....you damn people that say others know nothing of what pain love can be...I say, SCREW YOU. I mean you don't have to be a certain age damn it. Certain things can happen. You can care for some one very deeply and then get hurt. So what you can love at any age. It is still love if a girl loves her daddy, so why is the affection between two individuals any different?
on To Mouse and Reason by Spindle
14 Jun 2003, 9:55 PM
get a life..too much repition. try going to a church, there is infinite love there, after all it was god who gave his son. And only you can decide what it is you are to be. so make someting of it2
on New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld
15 Jun 2003, 11:37 AM
the last two were brilliant
on some deleted poem
21 Mar 2003, 9:17 PM
you sound like an agorophobic case...
on Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom
1 Jul 2003, 10:51 PM
love the end
on Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602
28 Sep 2003, 1:36 PM
goodness, are y'all never contented? It's a simple mistake! The sad thing is you haven't as much as a social life as would a sea cucumber. You sit in front of your screen tapping away comments that are better used on a blow fish.
on Break Me by Freethinker1602
28 Sep 2003, 6:15 PM
Some times people that cannot follow god's ways and cannot stop themselves must be broken. Then you can follow him wholey. God is always willing and there. What god do you know?
on Under Blood Oak by horus8
6 Oct 2003, 1:39 AM
and now to rate it. I think it is a piece worthy of praise there for I give you a 9 to bad there can't bea 6, right ;) kidding of course
on Under Blood Oak by horus8
6 Oct 2003, 1:40 AM
hey I'm on AIM at Impishkat
on such a horrible thing to waste by Freethinker1602
6 Oct 2003, 2:04 AM
thank god.