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Break Me (Lyric) by Freethinker1602
Father break me Throw me down to my knees Father show me What it is to be humbled by your name Break me and heal me whole I seem so unworthy to speak a name so pure Throw me upon my knees so I can start over again Father break me I need the shame to begin again right Father break me I am lost and prideful Humble me with your anger Humble me with your love Humble me with your voice Father break me make me different Fill my heart with your love and break me

Down the ladder: Addiction

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8344
Posted: September 28, 2003 1:31 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2003 1:31 PM PDT
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[n/a] Joe-joe @ 68.194.57.229 | 28-Sep-03/2:33 PM | Reply
You will not receive salvation/redemption by being "broken" or taken to task by your earthly or heavinly Father. Self reflection and discipline will get you where you want to go...Then, if you are worthy,.. your "Father" will be willing to converse with you. Stop being a jelly fish! You need a spine to stand up on your own two feet!
[3] baphomet @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Sep-03/2:46 PM | Reply
someone got daddy issues.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 28-Sep-03/6:15 PM | Reply
Some times people that cannot follow god's ways and cannot stop themselves must be broken. Then you can follow him wholey. God is always willing and there. What god do you know?
[6] jacqui @ 168.122.237.41 | 28-Sep-03/10:01 PM | Reply
definitely a good idea. it could be better but then again couldn't everything
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