poemranker ::HE FUCKING BIT ME(a some what true story) by Lucifer

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HE FUCKING BIT ME(a some what true story)

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Jul 2003 · 6 comments

When I felt your teeth sink beneath my skin I braced myself before the room began to spin Wow it felt good so good I cracked a crazy grin Both of us in that crazy fight just for the win God it made me so HORNY I wanted you within Man I'm so glad we both like it ruff We both like girls interestingly enough I'm so wild your pocket was in front oddly enough You certainly left a mark good enough Wonder how many others do this kinky stuff Man the pain felt so fine I thought I would faint I wouldn't be surprised if I saw my patron saint It couldn't keep it contained I had to use restraint I hope that my playful side and you will reacquaint Do it again and I'll have no complaint ;)

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[8] Freethinker1602 7-Jul-03/11:56 PM Reply
;)
[n/a] Lucifer › Freethinker1602 7-Jul-03/11:58 PM Reply
I thought the feeling couldnt end, that it would never cease, please could you just do it again, how about next week?(add in a few other peeps mebbeh(dang it I'm drooling, jk))
[0] smlink84 15-Nov-03/8:27 PM Reply
Why do you call yourself the fallen angel who now hates God and all whom he created in his image?
[0] smlink84 › smlink84 15-Nov-03/8:30 PM Reply
I did write another poem...you had asked..
[n/a] Bachus › smlink84 16-Nov-03/1:29 AM Reply
Because liking the devil + liking yourself = sex with horses. *)
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos 15-Nov-03/9:56 PM Reply
Cute.