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HE FUCKING BIT ME(a some what true story) (Free verse) by Lucifer
When I felt your teeth sink beneath my skin I braced myself before the room began to spin Wow it felt good so good I cracked a crazy grin Both of us in that crazy fight just for the win God it made me so HORNY I wanted you within Man I'm so glad we both like it ruff We both like girls interestingly enough I'm so wild your pocket was in front oddly enough You certainly left a mark good enough Wonder how many others do this kinky stuff Man the pain felt so fine I thought I would faint I wouldn't be surprised if I saw my patron saint It couldn't keep it contained I had to use restraint I hope that my playful side and you will reacquaint Do it again and I'll have no complaint ;)

Up the ladder: Claustrophobia
Down the ladder: "war is in the Air"

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10912
Posted: July 7, 2003 11:54 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2003 11:54 PM PDT
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[8] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 7-Jul-03/11:56 PM | Reply
;)
[n/a] Lucifer @ 68.48.88.129 > Freethinker1602 | 7-Jul-03/11:58 PM | Reply
I thought the feeling couldnt end, that it would never cease, please could you just do it again, how about next week?(add in a few other peeps mebbeh(dang it I'm drooling, jk))
[0] smlink84 @ 68.98.150.99 | 15-Nov-03/8:27 PM | Reply
Why do you call yourself the fallen angel who now hates God and all whom he created in his image?
[0] smlink84 @ 68.98.150.99 > smlink84 | 15-Nov-03/8:30 PM | Reply
I did write another poem...you had asked..
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 > smlink84 | 16-Nov-03/1:29 AM | Reply
Because liking the devil + liking yourself = sex with horses. *)
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 15-Nov-03/9:56 PM | Reply
Cute.
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