Re: Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous	5-Mar-03/7:20 PM
I just realized something....We can't communicate by E-mail...but do your parents know you have "THIS" account? We can leave note to each other this way.....
Re: Stolen Away by Carvaceous	5-Mar-03/7:18 PM
These shards of red Laying scattered all around Reflect the beauty A shimmer in the dark A glimmer of hope Some prayer for the future It's all that can be given For one who's heart Now broken in sorrow Lies surounding my feet A note of chance The sound of possibilities To look ahead But never forget This weeping man The hardest of choices Made these shards.....
Re: Olden by smlink84	21-Jan-03/7:32 PM
Pretty good, I see some Looking back with regret
Re: Thorns of Grace by smlink84	21-Jan-03/7:29 PM
okay, i get the gist, but it's just....umm...weird
Re: Pain in Death by Freethinker1602	12-Jan-03/7:43 PM
Very nicely done, shows REAL talent for this.
Re: Curse fait by Freethinker1602	12-Jan-03/7:38 PM
So what if it's juvenile, Hare, it still is good ,and Kitty, he's entitled to his opinion, at least it wasn't zero, anything written in this site should garuntee at least a 1.
Re: P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84	12-Jan-03/7:15 PM
Bearded-Man says, "inerestingly excellent.
Re: P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84	12-Jan-03/7:07 PM
Hey Man-with-pants, better than mine, though mine was more confusing.;-) Gardez votre promenade avec Jesus!
Re: Rose Wall by Carvaceous	12-Jan-03/6:59 PM
This is like....ummmm....a hopeless endevour?
Re: Ode to the inafamous dark angel by Lucifer	12-Jan-03/3:16 PM
Well, let's see, none of Dark Angel's comment are constructive in the slightest, and I don't beleive Darky votes all the time, if you leave a comment then you should vote, it's just respectful to the writers.
Re: Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer	12-Jan-03/3:13 PM
oh My god you actually put THAT on here, well, grr... You'll get it just you wait.....
Re: a comment on Track.... by Topaz Servias	7-Jan-03/5:32 PM
Gosh this line is kinda flat, My soul is squished beneath a mat; You can take that sandwich back, My dirty room is filled with tack.
Re: Slippery Reprieve by Carvaceous	7-Jan-03/5:18 PM
WEll done well done......shows you what life is like when it's elusiveness hides itself within your own grasp.
Re: Condolences by Carvaceous	7-Jan-03/5:15 PM
Well....ummm...instead of jumping around this one seems to flow in every direction all at once, going around and nipping itself in the butt. good job though, it sends the feeling of sorrowful forgetfulness.
Re: a comment on Track.... by Topaz Servias	1-Jan-03/6:01 PM
It's up to you, I made this while on the porceline crapper thingy.
Re: Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84	1-Jan-03/5:48 PM
Look at me, the stupid turd lookie now, I shot your bird I know the answer to life We all know it isn't your wife Are you going to eat MY fish? Well ywer gonne Sindit agel qish Your cat is dead, let's all rejoice I ate it's head, spit out it's voice. ( :-) Some time later, Man-with-Pants!!) Signed, Dirty-room
Re: Found Lost by Carvaceous	1-Jan-03/5:36 PM
My gosh, this is a memorable one, such pictures it plays into your mind, you relate to every word and hang on to the next.
Re: Mangled by Carvaceous	29-Dec-02/3:35 PM
A very interesting allusion, does it pertain to a memory?
Re: a comment on When I wake... by Topaz Servias	29-Dec-02/10:22 AM
What do you imply with that statement, Bachus?