on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik
22 Jan 2003, 11:55 PM
running through my head...all the things you said.....trying to make sense......nooooooooooooo....7
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
22 Jan 2003, 11:41 PM
aelo, i am street performer. i play with cobra. since my accident, i stay on computer all day. my cobra, he hit my eye. aahhhhgggghhhhh. i play flute. i play the wrong song... i go toooooooo tooooddlllleeeee tooooo toooooddllllleeeee tooooo... and he HIT ME. aahhhhhggghhhhh.
HE HIT MY EYE WITH THE POISON TOOTH
HE HIT MY EYE WITH THE POISON TOOTH
on Hinged by Imperfections
22 Jan 2003, 7:33 PM
hmmmmm....lovely...here's another 9 for you....
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
22 Jan 2003, 6:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I will not forget you. You've been wonderful! Thank you Jeremi for entering my life and bringing me so much joy, love, beauty, kindness, and happiness. You've truly shown me the way.....
on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 5:42 PM
Haha..9..
on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 7:04 AM
a hairy Brazillian? Where the hell do Brazillian waxes come from then? A painful experience indeed. Hahaaaaaaa....you always make me laugh....8
on Host by Imperfections
21 Jan 2003, 11:26 PM
NYC girls are the best...here's a 9
replying on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:40 AM
200 really? it's more like 50 under DA of course. why would you feel the need to communicate with me under a different name?
replying on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:32 AM
Why don't you enlighten me with who you are so I can read some of your 200 poems. Perhaps I would be able to learn something. Then again if it's like the lovely ode above, perhaps not.
replying on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:17 AM
Zzinia66 but of course. It's pleasure to interact with you again. Thank you for finding me so damn fascinating and for wasting your precious time dealing with a child like me.
on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:08 AM
and how many have you written? none. go read condom breaks....you think that's a haiku deserving of a zero? I deleted your comments because you were annoying and you kept changing your score.
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
20 Jan 2003, 6:56 PM
Nice. Very nice. And I said that you were an overweight Physics grad student from Cambridge who sits naked and oiled in his Lazy Boy rocking back and forth all while spitting out Physics theory. Here's a lollipop, for this is quite a lovely piece.
on Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT
20 Jan 2003, 6:46 PM
I like it. This is much, much, much better than the turtle poem. Here's a 9. I especially enjoyed the last two lines.
on Kidnapped In Love by singingsoul
20 Jan 2003, 6:41 PM
Hmmmmmm....at first when I read it I couldn't really understand it, but then I noticed that you were from India. How are you writing in Hindu (I am taking a guess here) and then translating it to English?
on The Militarization of America by Quarton
20 Jan 2003, 6:17 PM
It reads like a speech for the Democratic convention. I like what you have to say, but then again I am strongly skewed to the left....7
on Award acceptance speach by Bobjim
20 Jan 2003, 6:10 PM
I gather you're Prince Charles's pedophilic butler. There are worst things like being Mr. Townsend. Although at times I think you might be him as well. You've done it again BobbyJoe...here's some lotion and a lolipop...you're a smart boy now go and figure out what to do with each.
on untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo
20 Jan 2003, 6:06 PM
very nice...9
on The Drive In (Drugs broke her, she broke me) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Jan 2003, 11:23 PM
I here...should be I hear. Since I know nothing about drugs first hand...I won't even comment. I wept like a fool at the sight of a crack head in front of 7/11....perhaps there is such a thing as too innocent.