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the past (Free verse) by bxjay170
thinking of your eyes and the way you use to look at me makes me forget about the other one. i say i dont want you but just thinking of you gets me weak, i cant think clearly cauze your all thats on my mind it drives me crazy the way i cant keep my past behind. i sit and reminist on how we use to tell each other how much i love you its so hard to believe your so far away so all i do lonely in my room is wait for that day when ill see you again i know our love will last to the very end i love you baby your always be more then just a friend

Up the ladder: Suicide III
Down the ladder: 1969

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.6666667
Weighted score: 4.483454
Overall Rank: 12843
Posted: January 20, 2003 7:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2003 7:36 PM PST
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[1] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167 | 20-Jan-03/7:44 PM | Reply
Must you give us, New Yorkers, a bad name? cauze....cant.....reminist...its...ill....... Where in NYC are you from? seriously though this is really bad....even JLo from the Bronx writes better.
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