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the past (Free verse) by bxjay170

thinking of your eyes and the way you use to look at me makes me forget about the other one. i say i dont want you but just thinking of you gets me weak, i cant think clearly cauze your all thats on my mind it drives me crazy the way i cant keep my past behind. i sit and reminist on how we use to tell each other how much i love you its so hard to believe your so far away so all i do lonely in my room is wait for that day when ill see you again i know our love will last to the very end i love you baby your always be more then just a friend

Ornella Muti 20-Jan-03/7:44 PM
Must you give us, New Yorkers, a bad name? cauze....cant.....reminist...its...ill....... Where in NYC are you from? seriously though this is really bad....even JLo from the Bronx writes better.




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