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23-Jan-03/12:05 AM |
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still unique but not as good as the other poemes you have posted....7
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| Re: Perfect by wordontheverge |
23-Jan-03/12:09 AM |
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I like this....fighting the clouds for space... Overall, I like what you're trying to do, but at times it seemed choppy....work on the flow and then it would be in the 9/10 range.....for now 7.
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| Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik |
23-Jan-03/12:15 AM |
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the situation you describe is funny, but the sonnet is not working for me. What's darkest ever? Trees with leafs of leather?...odd, the image doesn't work.....6
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23-Jan-03/12:29 AM |
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Wow, teenage hormones.....just be asexual like me or go and get laid asap....geeez.... You want to take the crown from Christianity, really? What the hell do you even know about religion? It just sounded good so you threw it in, yes.
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23-Jan-03/12:33 AM |
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shorty said.....you needs a sista then you wouldn't be writing shit like that to try to impress her....4
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23-Jan-03/12:36 AM |
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you could work with this....but I can't...there is something good about it, but it's covered by filth. Clean it up for me.
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| Re: Mystery by Katie2 |
23-Jan-03/12:46 AM |
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Inspirational poetry....hmmmmm...I liked where you were going with the clear thought and then you went downhill again......completely eliminate the last stanza....and don't use she...make it from your own prespective.....we find ourselves in a less than perfect circumstance...i barely know you and yet i know what you're about, meaningless creation.
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23-Jan-03/2:19 AM |
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that's gay too.
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| Re: The Other Side of Me by Quarton |
24-Jan-03/12:31 AM |
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You get a kiss and a lollipop from sexy Ornella for your fine, fine poem on the duality of humankind.
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| Re: Snowblind by horus8 |
24-Jan-03/12:44 AM |
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Care for some chai to go with the eye and liver omlet? Delicious. 10
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| Re: The Ode that never was by Shardik |
24-Jan-03/1:50 AM |
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| Re: Afterglow by Imperfections |
24-Jan-03/1:52 AM |
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24-Jan-03/11:21 AM |
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| Re: Forbidden Fruit by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
15-Feb-03/7:54 PM |
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For 40K or for love I can, but for a pink bunny, I can't. Have you ever thought about a mail order bride? Yes.
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| Re: Asian Bicycle Saga by TanHand |
15-Feb-03/7:59 PM |
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Ahhhh.....you took a line from a Lil' Kim song. You should try doing the Hungarian alphabet while you're at it.
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| Re: INDECENCY by TanHand |
16-Feb-03/6:24 PM |
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You're a negro. You watch the Parkers.
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| Re: SHADOWS OF DARKNESS by TanHand |
16-Feb-03/6:39 PM |
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Do you know who King Diamond is? I'll see you in the grave you god forsaken whore.
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20-Feb-03/6:22 PM |
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haha...perhaps you should rent out some of JBH's gay pornos and learn how to
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| Re: Pinjur by Shardik |
21-Feb-03/4:36 PM |
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I always wanted Pinjur colored wings. Thanks. It's not a spice. Ohhhhh, I just noticed...the secret messages you used to leave for me on poemranker. Carolina's on my mind. Thanks! Your haiku had nothing to do with Pinjur. 0.
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| Re: Curry Gives You The Shits by spank me baby yeah |
21-Feb-03/7:08 PM |
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Hence, you should stay away from Indian food.
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