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INDECENCY (Free verse) by TanHand
I was the store of INDECENCY today The store for FILTH I bought NUTS AND CHOCOLATE MILK I FELT FILTHY I made a pineapple upside down cake In the ablative of our middle age I fed it to my cat WHO FELT INDECENT SO HE THREW IT UP ON MY BEAUTIFUL CARPET A CAUCASIAN BEAUTY FROM THE RUSSIAN STEPPE ALL RUINED I sharpened my pencil today I STUCK IT IN AND MOVED IT ABOUT I am NOT SOME SORT OF FILTHY MAN WHO ALWAYS THINKS ABOUT THE INDECENT AND YET.. AND YET.. I bought the newest Rolling Stones crapfest I listened to the same old songs once and then I FELT LIKE A NEGRO, EMBLACKENED BY MINE OWN CONSCIENCE That LASCIVIOUS TONGUE weighed on my mind Like my "momma's [fat] ass", ALL MY DANCING DID ME NO GOOD I SAT DOWN TO DINNER CURSING AT MY CREATOR FOR CREATING SUCH AN IMPERFECT BEING SUCH AS I URMF MM HOMEMADE MAC AND CHEESE URF DUH

Up the ladder: all the eyes are on
Down the ladder: Sex on the Weightbench

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5622
Posted: February 16, 2003 3:02 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2003 3:02 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.115.229 | 16-Feb-03/3:17 PM | Reply
this makes me lose lose all power of speech. i don't even know where to start.
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Feb-03/3:55 PM | Reply
Is it just me, or are you setting new boundaries for the term 'the one eyed mahout was a lonely wacko?' my favourite part was "[fat]" my choad buzzed than fairy-moaned.
[n/a] TanHand @ 63.214.120.242 > Bachus | 16-Feb-03/4:56 PM | Reply
My favourite part is "nuts and chocolate milk"?
[n/a] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.18.187 | 16-Feb-03/6:24 PM | Reply
You're a negro. You watch the Parkers.
[n/a] dmzoacan @ 68.14.26.239 > wOrnella Mutiw | 9-Apr-03/11:20 AM | Reply
Yesuh ma'am I sures do. Could you please be as kind as to tell me where the Rilke books is? WHORE
[8] god'swife @ 209.178.176.219 | 20-Feb-03/8:15 AM | Reply
Ends badly. Like the cake, you have stained a well crafted thing. I love L2,S2, though I'm sure I'm not interpreting it the way you meant. I would end this poem at "ALL MY DANCING..."
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