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SHADOWS OF DARKNESS

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

A woman weeps IN THE SHADOWS A stream forges a path in the dust SHADOWS RAGING INFERNO Her dead son Deep in the SHADOWS of the underworld Drinking absinth, smoking clovey delights Of herbal VAMPYRE His wiccan face PALE AS BUTTER MELTING IN THE SHADOWS Even the SHADOWS are too light for me I must PAINT THEM BLACK I must taste the taste of BLOOD I must capture a bat in my heartcage I feel an urge to build a marble city A city of DEATH Deep in the SHADOWS The SHADOWS OF DARKNESSS

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[8] Bachus 16-Feb-03/3:57 PM Reply
"I feel an urge to build a marble city" lol. i second that notion. i'll engineer the aqueduct and the pilgrimage.
[n/a] TanHand › Bachus 16-Feb-03/4:58 PM Reply
Black girls hate being called "Brown Sugar". My nose is still bleeding...I guess you have to be old and british to get away with that.
[n/a] wOrnella Mutiw 16-Feb-03/6:39 PM Reply
Do you know who King Diamond is? I'll see you in the grave you god forsaken whore.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › wOrnella Mutiw 17-Feb-03/5:37 AM Reply
King Diamond wouldn't wipe his bum with this poeme.




HE'D USE IT FOR LYRICS IN HIS NEXT EPIC CONCEPT ALBUM LOL
[n/a] VorioBuche 27-Aug-03/9:23 PM Reply
You're as goth as a blood red rose reclining on a cut of black velvet. Oh, and there's a drop of blood on the stem. And it's black.