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SHADOWS OF DARKNESS (Free verse) by TanHand A woman weeps
IN THE SHADOWS
A stream forges a path in the dust
SHADOWS
RAGING INFERNO
Her dead son
Deep in the SHADOWS of the underworld
Drinking absinth, smoking clovey delights
Of herbal VAMPYRE
His wiccan face PALE AS BUTTER
MELTING IN THE SHADOWS
Even the SHADOWS are too light for me
I must PAINT THEM BLACK
I must taste the taste of BLOOD
I must capture a bat in my heartcage
I feel an urge to build a marble city
A city of DEATH
Deep in the SHADOWS
The SHADOWS OF DARKNESSS
Up the ladder:
Sometimes it Hurts...
Down the ladder:
sandbars
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Posted: February 16, 2003 2:54 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2003 2:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9561 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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16-Feb-03/3:57 PM
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"I feel an urge to build a marble city" lol. i second that notion. i'll engineer the aqueduct and the pilgrimage.
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TanHand @ 63.214.120.242
> Bachus
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16-Feb-03/4:58 PM
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Black girls hate being called "Brown Sugar". My nose is still bleeding...I guess you have to be old and british to get away with that.
Do you know who King Diamond is? I'll see you in the grave you god forsaken whore.
King Diamond wouldn't wipe his bum with this poeme.
HE'D USE IT FOR LYRICS IN HIS NEXT EPIC CONCEPT ALBUM LOL
You're as goth as a blood red rose reclining on a cut of black velvet. Oh, and there's a drop of blood on the stem. And it's black.
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