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sandbars (Free verse) by rompingcat
well
when it rains
in my country
(ah ... to have such a tree
and gather leaves
inhale their power
press them to my heart)
and at the beach
i look for glimpses
of the pink shell lips
that would hold my music
pulsing
mixing salts
in quilted mirrorpools
in the sunglitterred sand
crabs scuffle through the reeds
in bloodwarm ankledeep
minnows turn like sequinshadows
beneath reflected clouds
and softsand ridges squish
skoosh against my soles
tide turns
and the scent of wind
cry of gulls
and we runsplash to the shore
past sandcastles
snowangels
stickworlds arranged in accidental harmony
our footprints momentarily ringed with dry
then puddled flat
lines sketched with toes and sticks
explain the universe
describe our hearts
for our eyes only
and the sea washes over
making maybe from forever
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Posted: February 28, 2003 12:06 AM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2003 12:06 AM PST
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