on Remember by NinjaPoet
22 Jan 2003, 12:56 AM
ahhhhhhh....sweet childhood memories...simple and to the point....8
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
22 Jan 2003, 11:41 PM
aelo, i am street performer. i play with cobra. since my accident, i stay on computer all day. my cobra, he hit my eye. aahhhhgggghhhhh. i play flute. i play the wrong song... i go toooooooo tooooddlllleeeee tooooo toooooddllllleeeee tooooo... and he HIT ME. aahhhhhggghhhhh.
HE HIT MY EYE WITH THE POISON TOOTH
HE HIT MY EYE WITH THE POISON TOOTH
on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik
22 Jan 2003, 11:55 PM
running through my head...all the things you said.....trying to make sense......nooooooooooooo....7
on Small Town Tavern by NinjaPoet
22 Jan 2003, 11:59 PM
ohhhhhhhh yeaaaaahhhhhh....9999999....i like your style alot...simple, sharp, accessible and to the point.
on Host by Imperfections
21 Jan 2003, 11:26 PM
NYC girls are the best...here's a 9
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
22 Jan 2003, 6:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I will not forget you. You've been wonderful! Thank you Jeremi for entering my life and bringing me so much joy, love, beauty, kindness, and happiness. You've truly shown me the way.....
on Hinged by Imperfections
22 Jan 2003, 7:33 PM
hmmmmm....lovely...here's another 9 for you....
on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 7:04 AM
a hairy Brazillian? Where the hell do Brazillian waxes come from then? A painful experience indeed. Hahaaaaaaa....you always make me laugh....8
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 10:54 PM
As you can see some people enjoy my work...Thanks!
Doctor, doctor keep him alive. would work better with"".
who shot/ would look great with a has inbetween them, otherwise a lovely piece.
Good but could use a more lovable protagonist.
you got it all!!....definitely a 10
9999999999999999999999999999999999999999
Clean and poignant. the title could be stronger like Burnt rubber, or Profilactic re-enactment. nah, it's fine.
ermp?
very nice
Gaping wounds of scorn, you were just getting going and it was all over (typical) have an 8
this is beautiful.
this may be rough in parts but I think precious.
A sweet poem, I liked where you went with stanza 1 felt I was there for a minute. The last 4 lines are almost redundant, so you need the heaven bit? otherwise it scrapes an 8 well done
Very nice. Cool images there. Very real.
Absolutly hilarious though.
Poem=good!
Doctor, doctor keep him alive. would work better with"".
who shot/ would look great with a has inbetween them, otherwise a lovely piece.
Good but could use a more lovable protagonist.
you got it all!!....definitely a 10
9999999999999999999999999999999999999999
Clean and poignant. the title could be stronger like Burnt rubber, or Profilactic re-enactment. nah, it's fine.
ermp?
very nice
Gaping wounds of scorn, you were just getting going and it was all over (typical) have an 8
this is beautiful.
this may be rough in parts but I think precious.
A sweet poem, I liked where you went with stanza 1 felt I was there for a minute. The last 4 lines are almost redundant, so you need the heaven bit? otherwise it scrapes an 8 well done
Very nice. Cool images there. Very real.
Absolutly hilarious though.
Poem=good!
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 5:24 PM
Why are you so intrigued by me? I've never said anything bad about you or your poetry, yet you continuously attack me. I am not going anywhere, so get it through your thick skull. Please, your definition of art is hilarious. What is art? Why are you the one to define it? Your poems are generic...you are average. Mine might be below average, but at least I am aware of it and I'm working on improving. But you think you are something special...why? Is it because you have a good grasp of the English vocabulary or perhaps you're quick with the dictionary. You try so hard to appear intelligent that instead you look like a fool. Use your fancy words and call people stupid, if that makes you feel good at the end of the day. But the bottom line is get a life....For God's sake just fucking ignore me. I don't write to you or waste my time writing you poems.
on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:08 AM
and how many have you written? none. go read condom breaks....you think that's a haiku deserving of a zero? I deleted your comments because you were annoying and you kept changing your score.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 10:56 AM
How intresing and unusual. You kept my attention and God only knows how hard that is to do these days. 8
on Kidnapped In Love by singingsoul
20 Jan 2003, 6:41 PM
Hmmmmmm....at first when I read it I couldn't really understand it, but then I noticed that you were from India. How are you writing in Hindu (I am taking a guess here) and then translating it to English?
on Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT
20 Jan 2003, 6:46 PM
I like it. This is much, much, much better than the turtle poem. Here's a 9. I especially enjoyed the last two lines.
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
20 Jan 2003, 6:56 PM
Nice. Very nice. And I said that you were an overweight Physics grad student from Cambridge who sits naked and oiled in his Lazy Boy rocking back and forth all while spitting out Physics theory. Here's a lollipop, for this is quite a lovely piece.
on Award acceptance speach by Bobjim
20 Jan 2003, 6:10 PM
I gather you're Prince Charles's pedophilic butler. There are worst things like being Mr. Townsend. Although at times I think you might be him as well. You've done it again BobbyJoe...here's some lotion and a lolipop...you're a smart boy now go and figure out what to do with each.
on The Militarization of America by Quarton
20 Jan 2003, 6:17 PM
It reads like a speech for the Democratic convention. I like what you have to say, but then again I am strongly skewed to the left....7
on untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo
20 Jan 2003, 6:06 PM
very nice...9
on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 5:42 PM
Haha..9..