| Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy |
24-Sep-03/5:01 AM |
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Sounds like someone's bitter. Take comfort in the likelihood that you probably don't have chlamydia, unlike them. Not your worst poeme, though. 6
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| Re: a comment on In the Cold Waste by razorgrin |
23-Sep-03/5:53 AM |
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I was going to respond, but you took the words right out of my mouth, sir.
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| Re: To Mom by Brittanyy |
22-Sep-03/6:28 PM |
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I considered being a nice person and not hassling you about your mom (I have a target for that), thereby skipping this poem. However, I read it. You owe me thirty seconds of a perfectly miserbable life. I'd just like to say I agree with Mr. Dreamer. Also, if you held the knife above your head, the angle would likely cause the blade to bounce off your rib or more likely collarbone and you'd just cut off your tit. Not saying that wouldn't be an idea. By the way, nobody does care. Except sliver, but he doesn't count. Likely just wants in your pimply panties anyway.
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| Re: Fall by Brittanyy |
22-Sep-03/6:23 PM |
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| Re: Red by Brittanyy |
22-Sep-03/6:22 PM |
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Whine whine whine. What, did you break a nail? Shitty rhythm, shitty cliched images and the self pity supplied the flies and stink lines.
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| Re: Yoko and Sakura Make Love by William Delacroix |
22-Sep-03/5:59 PM |
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Girl on girl action that fails to even harden one nipple. FAIL!
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| Re: A Meandering Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
22-Sep-03/5:57 PM |
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Nice. I like the Berserk one.
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| Re: A Bucolic Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
22-Sep-03/5:49 PM |
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Nice one. Very nice indeed.
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| Re: minotaur by Bill Z Bub |
22-Sep-03/11:41 AM |
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| Re: End of year poem by <~> |
16-Sep-03/9:13 AM |
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The stanza about September is wonderful.
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
12-Sep-03/7:11 AM |
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Gross. I smile. Flip flops for all.
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| Re: a comment on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8 |
12-Sep-03/7:02 AM |
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Between the drug dealer story and the "show me your tits", which was the icing on the cake, you get a twelve. or would if I could vote higher than ten. I hate some other stuff in the world too, though. Namely cold foggy weather and whoever is behind the lateness of my fucking student loan. i applaud you, sir.
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku at School by HaikuMofo |
12-Sep-03/6:57 AM |
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Markie was wearing the skirt the other day. The word 'shanty' always makes me break into giggles. Now the computer lab's looking at me funny.
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo |
12-Sep-03/6:55 AM |
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The lobefucker one was delightful. i'm jealous you beat me to the subject.
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo |
12-Sep-03/6:54 AM |
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Aww..cutie flower chick. you must find her. Who's the hottie in your room?
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| Re: Lets Do Lunch (At Ground Zero) by scitz |
11-Sep-03/9:18 AM |
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The rant rated a 2, but the senryu gets 7.
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| Re: null by Bill Z Bub |
10-Sep-03/6:55 AM |
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Mighty. Your kung-fu is awesome.
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| Re: a comment on I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin |
10-Sep-03/6:53 AM |
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I use the bastard English of your most tree-infested of ex-colonies. Thanks, though.
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| Re: a comment on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Sep-03/6:42 AM |
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I dunno, I'd like to give it a ten, but Jesus kinda messed up the dismount so 9/10 for the Christers.
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| Re: a comment on I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin |
10-Sep-03/6:39 AM |
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Bunny, there's a world of difference between a little plumber crack and a little over half of my ass.
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