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Fall (Free verse) by Brittanyy
touching happiness with unknowing fingertips kissing forever with ignorant lips embracing love loosely with confidence that when this leaf has fallen the wind will uplift the residue of her being the essence of her grace dilluding the place within you now hardened with strength the cold that resides the emptiness careened the weakness inside burried in hate the mask has been shattered the knots unbound warmth has been endured unwilling at first quenching the thirst secretly within

Down the ladder: Tribute to "The Cow"

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6001
Posted: September 21, 2003 3:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2003 3:37 PM PDT
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[9] sliver @ 63.190.64.104 | 21-Sep-03/9:17 PM | Reply
Hmmm. It's easy to get lost in this, the first time you read it. The second time it seems easier to understand. It must be painful, not knowing.
Only one R in buried. 9.
[2] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.138 | 22-Sep-03/6:23 PM | Reply
Dull. Learn to spell.
[10] *lindsey* @ 72.25.23.42 | 25-Jul-07/10:35 AM | Reply
Amazing.
Simpily Amazing.
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*lindsey*
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