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Fall (Free verse) by Brittanyy
touching happiness
with unknowing fingertips
kissing forever
with ignorant lips
embracing love
loosely with confidence
that when this leaf has fallen
the wind will uplift
the residue of her being
the essence of her grace
dilluding the place within you
now hardened with strength
the cold that resides
the emptiness careened
the weakness inside burried in hate
the mask has been shattered
the knots unbound
warmth has been endured
unwilling at first
quenching the thirst
secretly within
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6048
Posted: September 21, 2003 3:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2003 3:37 PM PDT
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Only one R in buried. 9.