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Fall (Free verse) by Brittanyy

touching happiness with unknowing fingertips kissing forever with ignorant lips embracing love loosely with confidence that when this leaf has fallen the wind will uplift the residue of her being the essence of her grace dilluding the place within you now hardened with strength the cold that resides the emptiness careened the weakness inside burried in hate the mask has been shattered the knots unbound warmth has been endured unwilling at first quenching the thirst secretly within

*lindsey* 25-Jul-07/10:35 AM
Amazing.
Simpily Amazing.
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*lindsey*




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