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POEM FOR PREPS (Free verse) by Brittanyy
I'm Popular Im pretty and Im better dressed then you. You losers think I like you but you havent got a clue. I know how much you envy me I see it in your eyes People think Im the coolest Cuz i sleep with all the guys. I may dress like a bimbo but It makes the guys come near, My shirt is down to there and, My skirt is up to here! My makeup is so heavy I can barely move my eyes But as long as its in style It makes it all worth while! Do you like my sweater? It cost My Daddy a hundred dollars! You may drive a station wagon or a rusty piece of crap But My rides got a system so I can blast my rap. Well thats the end of poetry I have better things to do, And if you dont like what Im saying then..Well..Screw you!

Up the ladder: Wanksta
Down the ladder: Snake (Yin)

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.111111
Weighted score: 5.0555553
Overall Rank: 6810
Posted: September 23, 2003 4:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2003 4:24 PM PDT
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[10] ho_hum @ 129.169.158.50 | 24-Sep-03/2:15 AM | Reply
Does this mean, oh joy of joys, that you are leaving? I also see that you have deleted "comments on this site part 2", which I take it means you are refusing my challenge to name 10 great minds who have achieved great things at or before the age of 16.

By the way the scintillating rythms of this poem have scored white hot lines across my soul. -10-
[6] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.98 | 24-Sep-03/5:01 AM | Reply
Sounds like someone's bitter. Take comfort in the likelihood that you probably don't have chlamydia, unlike them. Not your worst poeme, though. 6
[2] Beyond_Dreams @ 67.51.232.76 | 31-Jan-05/4:59 PM | Reply
way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
[n/a] Goad @ 217.226.20.184 | 31-Jan-05/5:47 PM | Reply
Here's a girly with multiple letters,
in her name, scorifying her "betters".
But of course she's just jealous,
she'd love having some fellas --
if she'd only the bits to go get hers!
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