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POEM FOR PREPS (Free verse) by Brittanyy

I'm Popular Im pretty and Im better dressed then you. You losers think I like you but you havent got a clue. I know how much you envy me I see it in your eyes People think Im the coolest Cuz i sleep with all the guys. I may dress like a bimbo but It makes the guys come near, My shirt is down to there and, My skirt is up to here! My makeup is so heavy I can barely move my eyes But as long as its in style It makes it all worth while! Do you like my sweater? It cost My Daddy a hundred dollars! You may drive a station wagon or a rusty piece of crap But My rides got a system so I can blast my rap. Well thats the end of poetry I have better things to do, And if you dont like what Im saying then..Well..Screw you!

Beyond_Dreams 31-Jan-05/4:59 PM
way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.




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