Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	12-Aug-02/3:20 PM
November does suck ass, but I'm rather fond of December.Not a bad poem though.
Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit	12-Aug-02/3:22 PM
This is fantastic! I giggle!
Re: Walls by razorgrin	13-Aug-02/6:11 AM
Shin-bojangles, stop being an ass. Else i'll punch you in the butt.
Re: I know. But I like it. by Shin-Bojangles	13-Aug-02/9:26 AM
The White Stripes are TOTALLY sweet.
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	13-Aug-02/9:29 AM
But the sea is full of Cthulhu and his minions. And squid. And submarines. The sea is scary.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	13-Aug-02/10:24 AM
Dear sir, seeing as your appreciation of metaphors is sadly limited,you're in little position to remark. As for your 'rewrite" remark, I suggest that you either do several month's work on your own drivel or simply euthanize the pieces of shit you put forth before the good public must view them. Flirting teenagers, eh? You must be a very mature sir to say such things. Your definition of "real poetry" seems to come from a very narrow view: the inside of your tumour-ridden colon. Good day to you.
Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #1 by poetandknowit	13-Aug-02/10:26 AM
meaningless tripe. There are so many others like this it is not worthy of notice.
Re: Winged Beauty by ThoughtfulSoul	13-Aug-02/10:58 AM
Yes, though this needs polishing, it's good deep down. Don't worry about "poetandknowit", he's a pompous, pretentious bastard who seems to have deemed himself the most knowing and mature "poet" on the site, and therefore it's his job to ensure creeping postmodernism and to keep all the comments on topic. He is,in short, a wannabe dictator, poorly endowed and lacking in social skills.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	13-Aug-02/12:03 PM
Darling, your brilliant use of the English language astounds me."Drivel" is a noun, not a verb. What on Earth is your degree in? Business? I'm sure you were at the top of your class at the Sad Redneck Community College, really you were. you said you'd voice your precious little opinion and move on.I'm waiting. You must be very mature for your age- what are you, 19? The object of the site is to discuss poetry as you said (so observant!you get a special short-bus, rubber-undies head-pat!), so why are you doing nothing more than writing your "deep" "hip" little snippets of your dramatic little life and bragging about the fact that you took English in college. English is for useless failed writers. you should have taken some real courses.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	13-Aug-02/12:12 PM
Poetandknowit, you're too kind. you're such a stern daddy figure, helping us poor plebians with our little poems. It's not that you don't coddle, it's that you're a self-righteous, blowhard with no talent backing up his pretentious little words.
Re: Drowning by kat_boost	14-Aug-02/5:54 AM
This is just runny, poorly-applied eyeliner, a black t-shirt for that "mall-goth" effect and a 16-year-old screaming at her parents about how "no one understands". Bah.
Re: Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8	14-Aug-02/6:02 AM
This is really goddamn good. wow and stuff.
Re: When I Sleep Alone by Jody Conn	15-Aug-02/8:46 AM
I'm "sire" he did, Robert.
Re: Strange but true by ==Doylum	15-Aug-02/11:21 AM
genius, as always. brightened up an otherwise shitty day.
Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
Re: odd star by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:42 PM
This is utter shit. Learn to use punctuation, dammit. Also, for your idiotic and cliched use of angel imagery, you should be skinned alive.
Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:43 PM
Cthulhu would be offended.
Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard	16-Aug-02/5:10 PM
She's too good for you, you pathetic little man.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Aug-02/10:18 AM
utter crap.