Re: Cyber Junkie by J.B. Manning	3-Jul-04/10:43 AM
Some pretty good lines in this and interesting enough to hold my interest.
Re: Translation by Dovina	4-Jul-04/11:44 AM
This is really quite a lovely little poem. I love the last three stanzas and my only suggestion is the third stanza. IMO, it doesn't quite flow as well as the rest of the poem. Still, it's exceptional as is. Good stuff and a solid nine.
Re: Rainbow by TwilightDawned	5-Jul-04/2:43 PM
Short and sweet. Nice imagery.
Re: Blobby blob code ** by MR Blobby	5-Jul-04/2:45 PM
You've got to be kidding! I'll give you a three just for having the guts to post it.
Re: Fury by J.B. Manning	5-Jul-04/2:47 PM
Kind of like a bad soap opera. Sorry.
Re: transmutation by William Delacroix	5-Jul-04/3:06 PM
I am speechless. So much written to say so little. You need to say more using an economy of words.
Re: ocd by FreeFormFixation	5-Jul-04/3:08 PM
Well, you managed to gross me out.
Re: Paradelle of Progress by Dovina	6-Jul-04/2:20 PM
congrats on trying something new and different. I enjoyed and give it a nine. Only 5 more to go?
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	6-Jul-04/7:20 PM
I will try one more time in reference to reality and give you another chance to ridicule me. But, this will be my final post on the subject. The basic oneness of the universe is one of the most important revelations of modern physics. At the subatomic particle level, all things are interrelated, interconneted and interdependent. Reality is an abstraction devised by our discriminating and categorizing intellects. To believe our concepts of separate things and events are realities of nature is an illusion, plain and simple. If you don't believe me, then you don't believe in quantum mechanics, period, and all of your arguments have no basis in fact. If you don't know this basic truth, then you should avoid the subject rather than expose your ignorance which so far, has been considerable.
Re: Absolute Truth (about Quarton) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	6-Jul-04/7:48 PM
What can I say but a ten. If I wasn't me, I'd even have a good laugh. (actually, I had one anyway.) I love limericks. Hear is one you might like: There was a young lady from Bright, who traveled much faster than light. She departed one day, in a relative way and arrived on the previous night.
Re: Ulterior Not Alterior by MacFrantic	8-Jul-04/11:44 AM
Not bad but you should avoid cliches such as "beyond a shadow of a doubt" and "damaged goods" and "universal truths." Oh, also "any way you put it." Be original as much as possible.
Re: Charter Of Rights by EAger to Offend	8-Jul-04/11:52 AM
I like the message in this piece and agree. One minor nitpick. I would delete the "off" so it would read, "who venture to new worlds for peace."
Re: Battlefield, Girl. by LucidRevelation	8-Jul-04/11:58 AM
Forget the rhyme and try free verse. Also, an economy of words would improve this. Try to say more with less words.
Re: Are You Experienced? by EAger to Offend	8-Jul-04/12:10 PM
Tho I'm not exactly sure what in hell you are staying, I am sure enough to give this a 9. Interesting!
regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-05/4:01 PM
This is quite a good read. Well done.
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	25-May-05/4:06 PM
Quite simply elegant and I don't impress easily. The best I have read at this site.
Re: Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT	25-May-05/4:21 PM
A solid nine. Fascinating!
Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-May-05/8:18 PM
Sorry about the criticism of your poem. I Was in a lousy mood and after reading it again, it does have merit though it would work better if you said more with less.)
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Aug-05/11:18 AM
rockmage, Did I do something to piss you off? You went through all my poems and gave each a zero. They can't be that bad, can they? Oh well, at least you were consistent and also, used your name rather than anonymous. This poem is pretty good. kind of humorous and surely original in its content. Your old buddy, Quarton
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Sep-05/10:13 AM
I liked parts of this but the cadence and rhythm are off by my reading. You could work on this without altering the basic theme of your poem. Good luck. quarton