Poemranker [Poem: Rainbow] [by TwilightDawned] Thu Nov 21 12:27:44 PST 2024

Rainbows of forbidden desire, flicker without the light, dimming in to the darkness, the kites of my heart take flight. Though the darkned colours, Washed away my sorrow, I Feel for nothing, I am a faded rainbow, drained of emotion filled colours.

[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 5-Jul-04/2:38 PM | Reply

Rainbows don't flicker. Other images are inaccurate of language. It's a common theme and hard to do well.

[n/a] zodiac @ 24.93.86.20 > Dovina | 5-Jul-04/2:53 PM | Reply

What does "inaccurate of language" mean?

[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > zodiac | 5-Jul-04/2:58 PM | Reply

Kites washing away sorrow.
dimming in to the darkness

[n/a] zodiac @ 24.93.86.20 > Dovina | 5-Jul-04/6:08 PM | Reply

That is not an appropriate answer.

[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > zodiac | 5-Jul-04/6:13 PM | Reply

Thank you.

[7] Quarton @ 12.217.221.61 | 5-Jul-04/2:43 PM | Reply

Short and sweet. Nice imagery.

[0] god'swife @ 4.231.163.56 | 6-Jul-04/7:36 PM | Reply

This is the worst poem I've seen this evening. Try saying something normally.