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Rainbow (Free verse) by TwilightDawned

Rainbows of forbidden desire, flicker without the light, dimming in to the darkness, the kites of my heart take flight. Though the darkned colours, Washed away my sorrow, I Feel for nothing, I am a faded rainbow, drained of emotion filled colours.

god'swife 6-Jul-04/7:36 PM
This is the worst poem I've seen this evening. Try saying something normally.




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