Re: a comment on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun	6-Dec-02/8:28 PM
it doesn't? its a song, it makes sense in context with the music when used by a songwriting genius like Martin Tielli. Ciao.
Re: Fatty Nerd Trilogy by Agemo-Z	6-Dec-02/8:08 PM
cruel intentions are funny aren't they?
Re: a comment on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun	6-Dec-02/7:58 PM
" As plain as broth. As wild as rice. You try so hard but just end up as nice. I would and I'd; I'd suicide for you. You shaved your head. You pierced your nose. You've done it all and all that's left are holes. You misery. You broken tree. I'll be the trunk and take the axe." (lyrics by Martin Tielli, from the album by Nick Buzz)
Re: Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun	6-Dec-02/7:25 PM
i think this is your best yet.
Re: Someone who by Sugarbbybuttrfly	6-Dec-02/7:14 PM
in the real time world beauty and ugly come wrapped up. two for one. our special deal. one life only. BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
Re: Allegheny Winter Lament by jdsnyd	3-Dec-02/10:31 PM
For some reason, I love the last line. "the bastards of creation" some good stuff here.
Re: a comment on she said by Bill Z Bub	3-Dec-02/10:24 PM
Hmm. Oddly, it was all one stanza originally. I decided to separate the lines at the last minute as an aid to the rhythm. Your suggestion is under consideration. Thanks, Rebecca.
Re: a comment on she said by Bill Z Bub	3-Dec-02/10:20 PM
Thanks again, INTRANSIT!
Re: a comment on she said by Bill Z Bub	3-Dec-02/10:19 PM
Thanks. Interestingly, this poem was untitled until I decided to post it here. And I actually considered "Lessons", but thats the title of another poem I've written.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	1-Dec-02/10:01 AM
<grin>
Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	30-Nov-02/10:54 PM
brilliant in its simplicity and directness or not but what the hell
Re: Devotion by Tyriana	30-Nov-02/10:47 PM
And I'm the lamb.
Re: Libra by Rex Karrs	30-Nov-02/10:45 PM
I like, but thats because I'm a Libra... :^)
Re: Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	30-Nov-02/10:33 PM
For thinking wide and epic and deeply, I dub thee sir ten ly.
Re: a comment on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun	29-Nov-02/9:22 PM
don't mind him, he's mad cuz his gerbil died. And he can't spell his own name.
Re: a comment on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun	29-Nov-02/9:20 PM
You're a bitter, bitter old man, aren't you? It's like looking into a mirror... but now I try to make friends and my life is a little happier because of it. ps my sister likes you
Re: A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun	29-Nov-02/8:47 PM
you go grrrl! that happened to me in high school, girl dumped me for my best friend. that really really sucks. really really REALLY sucks. Hell, that was a decade ago, and I'm still not over it.
Re: a comment on Life of some girl. by Plasticgirlwithgun	29-Nov-02/8:57 AM
Well, Keep writing.
Re: Drunken note #2 by blackball	28-Nov-02/3:55 PM
Well sir, I like it. I certainly do.
Re: Sociology of Deviance by blackball	28-Nov-02/3:39 PM
Really like the ending. But I'm not sure what its about.