Re: The Cat by blkarak	10-Dec-02/8:01 PM
excellent
Re: Check Yourself by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/5:59 PM
On second thought, make mine nine. This one still does it for me.
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	9-Dec-02/9:20 PM
And I've changed it again. This time: "as careful as the arrangement" to "like the careful arangement" and "somebody's cat" became "someone's cat" and I changed morning to morn. But then it seemed out of place, so I changed it back to morning again. Thouroughly modern.
Re: a comment on Untitled by ==Doylum	9-Dec-02/9:01 PM
I wasn't sure about that one, but I think you're right. Still, the word "untitled" is still a title. On this site, anyway. It's just a crappy, common title. And it's been a while since I've seen a traditional haiku here. Like I said, it has become a pet peeve of mine.
Re: a comment on route nine by Bill Z Bub	9-Dec-02/8:51 PM
I'm going to stay out of this one.
Re: a comment on She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David	9-Dec-02/6:22 PM
On the other hand, everyone else seems to love it, so what do I know?
Re: a comment on She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David	9-Dec-02/6:21 PM
I'm not sure. Not a moral. Maybe slight closure? It needs an ending.
Re: a comment on Untitled by ==Doylum	9-Dec-02/6:18 PM
Okay, okay, I guess I came on way too strong. Untitled poems are just a pet peeve of mine. As for the haikus, I just meant that I have no idea what they are about, and maybe a title would help. Peace?
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	9-Dec-02/11:37 AM
coming from you, this is high praise indeed. now i really AM blushing! But i still want to say "morn" instead of "morning". It just sounds better to my ear... Hrmm...
Re: Missing the In-Between by <~>	9-Dec-02/11:24 AM
hearty.
Re: a comment on triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub	9-Dec-02/11:22 AM
...and i thank you. I wasn't sure about this one...
Re: How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd	9-Dec-02/11:20 AM
Despite your high-falutin' words, I like it. Yup. I read it aloud and it sounds good to me. Or do I just love my own voice? Who knows. So olympian, I admire. Now I go back to the cthonic.
Re: Panning for gold by INTRANSIT	9-Dec-02/10:58 AM
Cool.
Re: Untitled by ==Doylum	9-Dec-02/9:12 AM
Firstly, all poems should have titles. A child without a name must not be loved. Secondly, a Haiku NEEDS a title. Without a title, these haikus are meaningless to me. Alas.
Re: She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David	7-Dec-02/11:15 PM
I like it, but it feels unfinished.
Re: a comment on route nine by Bill Z Bub	7-Dec-02/10:53 PM
Outwardly I may be humble, but deep inside I'm awash with arrogance. As all writers must be?
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	7-Dec-02/10:44 PM
Aw shucks, y'all are makin me blush.
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	7-Dec-02/8:19 AM
Thanks very much for the comments. It's so hard to get rid of some words, they are children in the brambles with scratches and dirt but beloved none the less. I shall be merciless. BTW you rock.
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	7-Dec-02/8:16 AM
Okay, I'm going to take all the advice. Feel free to vote again! Read me, Love me, Rank me. So selfish
Re: The Poem, The Explanation, The Goodbye by Piano	7-Dec-02/8:06 AM
Wow.