| Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/8:39 PM |
You're too kind. I want to give it a new title, but this is my highest ranked piece yet, and I don't want to erase the votes. I need the ego boost.
Perhaps later.
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| Re: a comment on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO |
19-Dec-02/8:28 PM |
Drat!
I'll get you someday, LETO!
SOMEDAY!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(lower curtain)
(end of act 1)
thank you ! thankyou!
Yes, I am quite the thesbian.
I mean, thespenian.
No, thistlepen!
Ack, thestplenisthle!
THESPIAN!
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| Re: Chalk by livingcanvas |
19-Dec-02/8:23 PM |
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
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| Re: "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus |
19-Dec-02/8:04 PM |
"eat my nuts"? I have to listen to that all day at work! I don't want to have to listen to that when I come home to poemranker!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
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| Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
19-Dec-02/8:00 PM |
its got a beat, you can dance to it,
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
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| Re: a comment on A christmas thought by keatsImnot |
19-Dec-02/7:58 PM |
" You can feel it now, it's in the dirt
Labour Day is drawing near.
A time to sing a shout for joy.
In Bangcock was born a boy."
You're right! I like it better now!
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| Re: a comment on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus |
19-Dec-02/7:54 PM |
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<center><b>I just discovered html!</b></center>
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| Re: a comment on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus |
19-Dec-02/7:53 PM |
<b>my tornado has no nose.</b>
<i>how does it smell?</i>
<b>awful!</b>
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| Re: pee haiku by New Life Drug |
19-Dec-02/7:50 PM |
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
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| Re: When Im Gone by New Life Drug |
19-Dec-02/7:49 PM |
Keep working on it. It's starting to shape up nicely.
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
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| Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
19-Dec-02/7:41 PM |
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| Re: THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO |
19-Dec-02/7:38 PM |
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
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| Re: DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO |
19-Dec-02/7:36 PM |
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I counted 20 spelling errors. Do I win a prize? Is he a mad genius or just in need of a spellchecker?
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| Re: The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus |
19-Dec-02/7:26 PM |
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<scottish accent> Grrrreat title. Grrrrrrrrreat. </scottish accent>
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| Re: a comment on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/7:20 PM |
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athank you. i would post more art there, but I don't currently have access to a scanner.
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| Re: a comment on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/7:18 PM |
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Good suggestion. You always know the right thing to say. Just like a woman. How do they do that? You make me feel grand.
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| Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/7:14 PM |
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no, fomented is the right word.
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| Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/8:58 AM |
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yap, that is what I meant, but the other way does sound a little more sturdy.
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| Re: no cure by New Life Drug |
18-Dec-02/8:55 PM |
"there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure
for love."
-Leonard Cohen
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| Re: a comment on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
18-Dec-02/8:52 PM |
Besides playing with line breaks and spacing and punctuation, I added the line
"dustchoked
in the angles,
the wailing
and the whiteness"
and added a "the"
to "final flight"
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