Re: Brackish by <~>	1-Jan-03/7:30 PM
Wonderfully beautifully wintery. 10
Re: The Day the Winter Muse Fighters of the World Came By by <~>	1-Jan-03/7:21 PM
I think the soap dropped me on my head as a child. Not sure I understand whats going on here, but was very amused. 8
Re: a comment on unsent by Bill Z Bub	1-Jan-03/7:09 PM
Not sure what the golden q-tip is, but thanks, dude. I think. I'm bloody tired.
Re: Hewed by horus8	1-Jan-03/7:04 PM
really interesting and full of dark emotions. I must ponder it again.
Re: Something ot other by Myte342	1-Jan-03/6:52 PM
Je suis le pamplemouse et dans le fenetre. Avec les ouef.
Re: Star Wars theme by Myte342	1-Jan-03/6:50 PM
What an incredible waste of bandwidth you've discovered!
Re: a comment on strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub	1-Jan-03/2:27 PM
Yeah, that first line is one thats been bugging me, but I'm not sure what to change it to yet. At the time I meant it to be something mystical. I wrote the first half of this many years ago. Thankyou, yes, I want to turn you on. I want to turn on the world! Any suggestions?
Re: haunter of the dark by razorgrin	1-Jan-03/9:15 AM
Ia! Ia! Azathoth! Azathoth!
Re: new year's eve by razorgrin	1-Jan-03/9:12 AM
That happens to me every friggin' year. I never plan ahead. When will I learn?
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	22-Dec-02/5:03 PM
Hell, I think you just pushed me to the #1 spot. I feel like I should open some champaigne. ... And yet I'm not satisfied with this one at all. I need to completely rewrite the second stanza.
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	21-Dec-02/11:24 PM
Thanks. I agree it's a sudden change. I'm definately not finished revising this one, so all comments are welcome. I like the last strophe too much to cut it. Maybe cut or modify the preceding lines... or add a segue? Hoom Humm Hoom...
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	21-Dec-02/5:07 PM
Thanks, for the praise, and the high mark. Rate me rate me rate me again.
Re: Come Back to Me by jlanza	20-Dec-02/5:15 PM
ah, young romance. and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart! It all adds up to the divine number 7. cuz I feel silly and whispy.
Re: Junk by Bonehiss	20-Dec-02/5:11 PM
don't let the man get his hands on your junk. gotta love this piece, 'cuz you've got the funk
Re: Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain	20-Dec-02/5:07 PM
rough, immediate, alive, sensual. keep going!
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/9:43 PM
Ha. Thanks, man. And for another brief second, I'm swingin' at the top. ... So thats why Dark Angel is all over those lists. Hm.
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/9:31 PM
I was commenting on the fact that this poem appeared in the top 15 for about an hour before someone gave it a zero out of spite. thats all. I'm going to rewrite it anyway.
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/9:10 PM
...and its gone. ephemeral, intransient, and impermanent. like love and life and the cherry blossoms. and a cold steam whistle on a sunday afternoon.
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/9:00 PM
WTF was that? Its kinda like winning an Oscar, innit? ie totally meaningless, and somewhat random. I will revise this one later.
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/8:46 PM
In fact, I just realized, I made the top 15! Number 11 right now. Holy mother of pearl! KwanYin have mercy on this insignificant worm. I am shocked. Truly shocked. Just waiting for the inevitable backlash votes...