Comments byBill Z Bub, 441–460 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Brackish by <~> 1 Jan 2003, 7:30 PM
Wonderfully beautifully wintery. 10
on The Day the Winter Muse Fighters of the World Came By by <~> 1 Jan 2003, 7:21 PM
I think the soap dropped me on my head as a child.
Not sure I understand whats going on here, but was very amused. 8
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub 1 Jan 2003, 7:09 PM
Not sure what the golden q-tip is, but thanks, dude. I think.

I'm bloody tired.
on Hewed by horus8 1 Jan 2003, 7:04 PM
really interesting and full of dark emotions.
I must ponder it again.
on Something ot other by Myte342 1 Jan 2003, 6:52 PM
Je suis le pamplemouse et dans le fenetre. Avec les ouef.
on Star Wars theme by Myte342 1 Jan 2003, 6:50 PM
What an incredible waste of bandwidth you've discovered!
replying on strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub 1 Jan 2003, 2:27 PM
Yeah, that first line is one thats been bugging me, but I'm not sure what to change it to yet. At the time I meant it to be something mystical.
I wrote the first half of this many years ago. Thankyou, yes, I want to turn you on. I want to turn on the world!
Any suggestions?
on haunter of the dark by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 9:15 AM
Ia! Ia!
Azathoth!
Azathoth!
on new year's eve by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 9:12 AM
That happens to me every friggin' year. I never plan ahead.
When will I learn?
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 5:03 PM
Hell, I think you just pushed me to the #1 spot. I feel like I should open some champaigne.
...
And yet I'm not satisfied with this one at all. I need to completely rewrite the second stanza.
replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 11:24 PM
Thanks. I agree it's a sudden change. I'm definately not finished revising this one, so all comments are welcome. I like the last strophe too much to cut it. Maybe cut or modify the preceding lines... or add a segue?
Hoom Humm Hoom...
replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 5:07 PM
Thanks, for the praise, and the high mark.
Rate me
rate me
rate me
again.
on Come Back to Me by jlanza 20 Dec 2002, 5:15 PM
ah, young romance.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart!
It all adds up to the divine number 7.
cuz I feel silly and whispy.
on Junk by Bonehiss 20 Dec 2002, 5:11 PM
don't let the man get his hands on your junk.
gotta love this piece, 'cuz you've got the funk
on Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain 20 Dec 2002, 5:07 PM
rough, immediate, alive, sensual.
keep going!
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 9:43 PM
Ha. Thanks, man. And for another brief second, I'm swingin' at the top.
...
So thats why Dark Angel is all over those lists. Hm.

replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 9:31 PM
I was commenting on the fact that this poem appeared in the top 15 for about an hour before someone gave it a zero out of spite.
thats all.
I'm going to rewrite it anyway.
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 9:10 PM
...and its gone. ephemeral, intransient, and impermanent. like love and life and the cherry blossoms. and a cold steam whistle on a sunday afternoon.
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 9:00 PM
WTF was that?
Its kinda like winning an Oscar, innit?
ie totally meaningless, and somewhat random.
I will revise this one later.
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 8:46 PM
In fact, I just realized,
I made the top 15! Number 11 right now.
Holy mother of pearl!
KwanYin have mercy on this insignificant worm.

I am shocked. Truly shocked.
Just waiting for the inevitable backlash votes...