Comments byBill Z Bub, 421–440 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 13 Jan 2003, 3:30 PM
Thanks dude.
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13 Jan 2003, 3:19 PM
Because I changed a few words.
Also, I'm trolling for more votes.
:^P
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub 13 Jan 2003, 3:15 PM
Butter, eh?
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub 13 Jan 2003, 3:14 PM
I know two things about flowers: jack and squat. Thanks for the info. :)
on When she beats me by Win 12 Jan 2003, 8:37 PM
Doesn't exactly sound like a healthy relationship. In fact it sounds downright disturbing.
I kinda dig the poem though.
on ny road trip by daniella 12 Jan 2003, 7:38 AM
quite good. feels like I'm driving down a nowhere road. here's an eight I found in my pocket.
on Meditation 02 by Blue Magpie 12 Jan 2003, 7:26 AM
I'm impressed. I like this very much.

"The shark now swims the way he swam
when first his species learned to swim
and all of times strong calloused hands
have done their best to polish him."

That's great! One thing: "times" -> "time's"
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 11 Jan 2003, 8:16 AM
a ten if I ever saw one.
That might help. Praise jesu.
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub 10 Jan 2003, 8:11 PM
God's wife is one of my favorite poets, favorite people, on this site.
And I had my heart set on a dancing hut with chicken feet, but ostrich legs shall have to do.
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 8 Jan 2003, 6:01 AM
Or a pirate.
replying on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 7 Jan 2003, 8:13 PM
Yeah, but I'm a minimum wage slave, and I write this shite. I think its time to become a professional student again.
Poverty is scarier than any ghost story.
replying on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 7 Jan 2003, 7:57 PM
HP Lovecraft ain't got nothin' on me.
Except of course for his superlative command of English grammar and language. Or some such.
on red lorry yellow lorry by deano 6 Jan 2003, 6:16 AM
This is the opposite of Iron Maiden singing S.T.Colerige.
"and the ship it sinks like lead into the sea"



replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 5 Jan 2003, 7:25 PM
yer a good man, laddie. cheers, I'd buy ye a Guinness if I could.
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub 5 Jan 2003, 5:53 PM
You made me smile and think warm warm thoughts. Thanks. I think this means I'm on the right track here.
on Hot Maid by Agemo-Z 3 Jan 2003, 7:50 PM
I like the concept of a hot maid. But this is just dumb.
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub 2 Jan 2003, 7:25 PM
Truly this is the highest praise.

As for "yours truly", I just like to be different. Not always the right thing to do.
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub 2 Jan 2003, 5:45 PM
Yes I do. Take a look at "Fa11ing", "Route Nine", "What I Saw at Work Today", and "Lister Writes Haiku" to name four on this site alone.
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub 2 Jan 2003, 4:17 PM
You are so right. Thank you, my dear. Thank you.