| Re: a comment on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub |
10-Apr-03/9:29 AM |
I can live with settle, but the un-origional trolls who follow him around to try to get some sort of a sad life are too much.
Nice poem Bill, but didn't really connect with me, so I won't vote on it. Listen to the suggestions and re-post it later.
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| Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig |
10-Apr-03/9:19 AM |
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Nice. Very nice. Have a 9.
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| Re: a comment on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz |
10-Apr-03/9:17 AM |
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On second thoughts, how about 'She's scared ans she's tired and she's mortally hurt' as a last line?
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| Re: SHE TRIES by calilegzzz |
10-Apr-03/9:15 AM |
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Make it a lyric, and maybe another line or two. It doesn't seem quite finished.
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| Re: a comment on I Had A Little Nut Tree by Yardbird |
11-Jan-03/6:23 AM |
I've got one.
He's a turd with an attitude problem.
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| Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
9-Jan-03/4:00 PM |
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So how about some serious help? Or votes.
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| Re: The French Shark by -=SeTTle=- |
8-Jan-03/3:08 AM |
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Why don't you go, no matter how often we flush?
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| Re: Song of Exodus by marvelis |
8-Jan-03/2:57 AM |
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| Re: Untimely Demise by marvelis |
8-Jan-03/2:56 AM |
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Nice one. The final message seems sadly true. 9
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| Re: Apocalypse by marvelis |
8-Jan-03/2:55 AM |
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Should be a lyric, methinks. 9
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| Re: a comment on Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/1:49 AM |
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Or perhaps, 'It sure is'?
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| Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
7-Jan-03/12:50 AM |
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How about a new one: 'Shitewalker'?
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| Re: Jewel by cleverdevice |
6-Jan-03/12:38 PM |
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I feel bad about squashing bugs now. (except mozzies, obviously)
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| Re: red lorry yellow lorry by deano |
6-Jan-03/12:36 PM |
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It deserves 0, but I give 10 to prevent it staying around in the bottem.
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| Re: Drowning in Me by scitz |
6-Jan-03/12:34 PM |
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Perhaps make it into a lyric?
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| Re: SEX (II) by blkarak |
6-Jan-03/12:25 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
5-Jan-03/3:50 AM |
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Was that an attempt to be witty?
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| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
5-Jan-03/3:49 AM |
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zzinnia, I don't care about helpful comments. Thats great. If you think you can help thats fine. What I said was that people like D.A. and PAKI are being all high and mighty and saying it's shit without even reading it sometimes, and not leaving suggestions. The fact remains, they try to show they are great by screwing other people around.
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| Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
5-Jan-03/3:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria |
4-Jan-03/1:15 PM |
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She is so going to kick your ass.
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