Re: Mannequin (draft) by Ranger	2-Jan-03/5:33 PM
Excellent. What were you smoking?
Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey	2-Jan-03/5:50 PM
Ouch. Been there, done that, got the postcard. 9. Bah, I'm upset again now.
Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger	3-Jan-03/4:29 PM
Nice one. Don't be put off by the 'experianced' poets. I mean, sure, they know everything about the world and if they don't like it, it's crap. Well, thats bullshit. If you like a poem, it's good for you. All that matters is, do you like it? If so, you've done a good job. And remember my motto:- ' Fuck 'em if they don't like it, 'cause they're all bastards anyway'. 10, Because I liked it. Anyone who wants to rip it to pieces, Sod off and get a life you low-life sadist piece of crap. Crawl off back to your hole and die. It's people like you that ruin life for the rest of us. Sad Fucks.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jan-03/1:48 AM
Farewell my fiend. Of all my opponents, you are the most ignoble (and unhinged). Good luck and good bye!
Re: SEX (II) by blkarak	6-Jan-03/12:25 PM
Beautifully dirty. 9
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jan-03/12:28 PM
Another brillient poem. How do you make them? 10
Re: Drowning in Me by scitz	6-Jan-03/12:34 PM
Perhaps make it into a lyric?
Re: red lorry yellow lorry by deano	6-Jan-03/12:36 PM
It deserves 0, but I give 10 to prevent it staying around in the bottem.
Re: Jewel by cleverdevice	6-Jan-03/12:38 PM
I feel bad about squashing bugs now. (except mozzies, obviously)
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jan-03/1:48 PM
I give 5, not as it is deserved, but as it will banish this shite to obscurity.
Re: Apocalypse by marvelis	8-Jan-03/2:55 AM
Should be a lyric, methinks. 9
Re: Untimely Demise by marvelis	8-Jan-03/2:56 AM
Nice one. The final message seems sadly true. 9
Re: Song of Exodus by marvelis	8-Jan-03/2:57 AM
Also good. 9
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jan-03/3:01 AM
Very, very good. 10
Re: The French Shark by -=SeTTle=-	8-Jan-03/3:08 AM
Why don't you go, no matter how often we flush?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jan-03/4:03 PM
More art than I poem, methinks. How about entering it at the tate modern?
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jan-03/8:56 AM
Dark Angel is built upside-down, because food goes up his arse and crap comes out his mouth.
Re: SHE TRIES by calilegzzz	10-Apr-03/9:15 AM
Make it a lyric, and maybe another line or two. It doesn't seem quite finished.
Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	10-Apr-03/9:19 AM
Nice. Very nice. Have a 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Apr-03/9:22 AM
Add some spacing every four lines. Also, the last 4 lines don't ryme so well. Maybe you could change them?