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SHE TRIES (Free verse) by calilegzzz
What part is real and what part is a game?
Her world falls apart, but is she to blame?
Is she sain, or'is she crazy
loseing grip on the truth, realities hazy
Moments of clarity, so sure of whats real.
In the blink of an eye she doesnt know what she feels
Is she strong enough to stand on her own
And is there anything more then the pain she has known
All alone she sits and she cries
She is scared and shes tired,
But each day she still tries!
She wonders what is right and what is wrong
It takes all of her strength , to keep holing on
So many tears cried that fall to the dirt
Will she find her way through
all this confusion and hurt
Still she beleives in her strength to stand alone
She has faith that there's more, then the hell she has known
And she wont forget what it is, that she is holding on for..
..A life beyond addiction, she can't let it win anymore
So here alone, she will sit and she'll cry
She wont give up, or give in,
She will continue to try
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11077
Posted: April 10, 2003 7:19 AM PDT; Last modified: April 15, 2003 1:58 AM PDT
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