| Re: Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer |
12-Dec-03/2:06 PM |
Wild - I love it
Good show.
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| Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus |
12-Dec-03/2:05 PM |
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Wow i was number 2 for 49 mins. I must find that romanian vintage.
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| Re: Use Me by dragonfly |
12-Dec-03/2:01 PM |
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Loved the opening but s2 ruined the feeling - damn ! You have potential and i'd love to see a more concise version. If you open as strongly as this you must close as strong (or more) 7
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| Re: What I really needed by Shardik |
12-Dec-03/1:58 PM |
I think i know what your're wrting of here.
Dad?
You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride.
I'm moved 10
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| Re: Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
12-Dec-03/1:53 PM |
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| Re: The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
12-Dec-03/1:51 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus |
11-Dec-03/3:08 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus |
11-Dec-03/3:08 PM |
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THanks JH, I was gonna end it originally there but went too far. I have taken your advice - thankx
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| Re: a comment on Christ For Sale by Caducus |
11-Dec-03/11:13 AM |
Thanks for your comment.
Please allow me to explain why i used slut matriarch.
The blessed Virgin Mary is a paragon whom millions worship. Catholicism states that there should be no sex before marriage and my point here is that in the eyes of some religious extremists the mother may be thought of as hmm lets say loose.
Some communion bread is imported from buddhist/jewish countries which is kind of ironic ehrn you think that this bread is snapped, consumed, and devoured (like Jesus). Also the third world after heaven and earth is hell - which is the third world, a living hell. I am not a devil worshipper, but i do however embrace the devils we mortals fear. I have committed many sins, one of which i committed when i attempted suicide, so in the eyes of the 'good book' i am evil and have spent (like many of us) trying to please Christ who i am arguing maybe an exaggerated myth.
Hell I blame MArtin Scorsese ! and if i burn in hell at least I'll be with Goodfellas watching the last temptation of christ.
I admire those who believe in god, without any feelings of negativity or bemusement.
Thanks to all who comment, and apologies if offended.
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| Re: Second Sight by Nitroxide |
27-Nov-03/3:19 AM |
typo line 2.
Admirable sentiment, this if more concise could pack a harder punch, nevertheless i liked where you went with it.7
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| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-03/3:17 AM |
oh yeah ! By the way the name please of the grandfather clock (ripping its guts out poem please????)
I took everything I had
and put it underground to decay,
and welcomed the invisible world.
A world of the unseen vitamin,
where thoughts become the
granules of life.
Where dirt is edible and tastes
like the sun.
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| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-03/3:16 AM |
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This is my kinda thing and as a writer of death, graves and balh blah blah i give you maximum respect on this one. I'm tenning ya baby !
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| Re: Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer |
27-Nov-03/3:13 AM |
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says what a haiku does , a haiku about a haiku - novel idea 7
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| Re: Supercharged by Nicholas Jones |
27-Nov-03/3:10 AM |
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| Re: An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme |
27-Nov-03/2:00 AM |
I've been checking your vote archives and from what i see, someone is zeroing you out of petty revenge.
At least I know your better than that.
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| Re: The Boxer by DreamerSupreme |
27-Nov-03/1:58 AM |
Liked the Picasso reference in S1 and the unrelenting mood of violence you have created, makes me want to kill the bastard.
Good stuff
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| Re: a comment on Pinches by peaceseeker |
26-Nov-03/3:59 PM |
I think your lost my dear, this is poemranker and you are a shit poet and I have no mother complex, just a mother fucker complex and you are it.
I will not fuck off but if oyu wish to bring my mother in to this - fine - it shows you for the stinking steam on shit you are.
You Cunt.
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| Re: Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik |
26-Nov-03/3:50 PM |
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Haiku? Who cares it shines like snow man ....10 and a personal favourite of mine.
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| Re: a comment on Pinches by peaceseeker |
26-Nov-03/10:30 AM |
I suggest you stop your vacuous attempts at writing poetry. Also Amazon.com have a fantastic half price dictionary on sale so you can understand bigger words.
It is not my fault your poetry sucks like a porn queen.
Do you understand that fuckwit?
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| Re: a comment on Oral Sex by Shit-Crumpets |
26-Nov-03/2:18 AM |
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