on the feeling was never there by blackball
20 Dec 2002, 4:43 AM
Distinctive,poignant a fine read -8-
on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
20 Dec 2002, 4:45 AM
better
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 8:56 AM
Klingon to it, i like it
I vote 1 for my joke and 7 for your poem
I vote 1 for my joke and 7 for your poem
on THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO
20 Dec 2002, 5:26 AM
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
20 Dec 2002, 4:44 AM
I gotta love ya ! wonder how many kids twisters spawned?
on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO
20 Dec 2002, 5:13 AM
a good poem but marred by interruptions while reading due to the grammar, spelling. I too have been damned for the same wrong, not bad -6-
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 5:24 AM
Sustained mood and well composed, albei more style than substance, good poem and welcome to p/r -7-
on THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO
20 Dec 2002, 5:26 AM
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
on Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle
19 Dec 2002, 8:59 AM
'Maimed' for the perfectionist in you. this strong piece should not be weakened by spelling errors now bend over boy !
WHATTTEEEEEEESH !
the 1st 4 lines stanza 2 are awesome. 7-
WHATTTEEEEEEESH !
the 1st 4 lines stanza 2 are awesome. 7-
I dont always vote on the whole poem and this one by you is a classic example why.
Stanza 1 nothing wrong with it.
its a bit generalistic and wishy washy from there.
However I wrote a whole poem last week around 2 lines i wrote from a poem 10 years ago, it was well received on here so just remember all the poetry you write is good because you write it, the key is finding the path to peoples empathy and originating a unique style that people buy. Anyway happy holiday hobojo, 0 votes fly around on this site like tears in a pram its not bad ---5
Stanza 1 nothing wrong with it.
its a bit generalistic and wishy washy from there.
However I wrote a whole poem last week around 2 lines i wrote from a poem 10 years ago, it was well received on here so just remember all the poetry you write is good because you write it, the key is finding the path to peoples empathy and originating a unique style that people buy. Anyway happy holiday hobojo, 0 votes fly around on this site like tears in a pram its not bad ---5
on Fact of the Matter by marvelis
19 Dec 2002, 4:38 AM
Bravo Sir, this is vivid, started strong and ended strong, making a good use of a philosophy without pretentiosness -7-
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:53 AM
Wanting to forgive
but can't let go
pride is taking over the love.
*****how true is that***
I like !
but can't let go
pride is taking over the love.
*****how true is that***
I like !
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:59 AM
No Mistake its frui tree:
the mouth of Pearl River. Dongguan abounds in lychee frui trees, rice noodles, crabs, sausage, grass-woven handicrafts. The Dongguan Lychee Festival...
http://www.chinatravelone.com/english/de
richa your too clever for everyone, now i have seen the light and this poem deserves to be totally read/absorbed/studied for more than a glance
the mouth of Pearl River. Dongguan abounds in lychee frui trees, rice noodles, crabs, sausage, grass-woven handicrafts. The Dongguan Lychee Festival...
http://www.chinatravelone.com/english/de
richa your too clever for everyone, now i have seen the light and this poem deserves to be totally read/absorbed/studied for more than a glance
on Leap by robs_remains
19 Dec 2002, 6:47 AM
Haunting/quite touching, An inconclusive ghost story 'tim burtonesque' in style
on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 8:50 AM
You have many a string to your bow, and this split the arrow,
bring The hooded man the maid
(applause from the sherriff and nottinghams peasants)
bring The hooded man the maid
(applause from the sherriff and nottinghams peasants)
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:59 AM
10/10
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 5:01 AM
5 ?
who voted 5?
goto poemrankerforbrailusers.com.
this aint no 5 !
Man !
who voted 5?
goto poemrankerforbrailusers.com.
this aint no 5 !
Man !
on UltraSound by UnityMitford
19 Dec 2002, 5:02 AM
Either did I till puberty.
good poeme
good poeme