| Re: Fact of the Matter by marvelis |
19-Dec-02/4:38 AM |
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Bravo Sir, this is vivid, started strong and ended strong, making a good use of a philosophy without pretentiosness -7-
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19-Dec-02/4:53 AM |
Wanting to forgive
but can't let go
pride is taking over the love.
*****how true is that***
I like !
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19-Dec-02/4:59 AM |
No Mistake its frui tree:
the mouth of Pearl River. Dongguan abounds in lychee frui trees, rice noodles, crabs, sausage, grass-woven handicrafts. The Dongguan Lychee Festival...
http://www.chinatravelone.com/english/destination/citys/donguan.htm
richa your too clever for everyone, now i have seen the light and this poem deserves to be totally read/absorbed/studied for more than a glance
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19-Dec-02/4:59 AM |
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19-Dec-02/5:01 AM |
5 ?
who voted 5?
goto poemrankerforbrailusers.com.
this aint no 5 !
Man !
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| Re: UltraSound by UnityMitford |
19-Dec-02/5:02 AM |
Either did I till puberty.
good poeme
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| Re: March by <~> |
19-Dec-02/6:44 AM |
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If only it were spring, you tease us with warmer climes. Is melt and mud the season change, my ever fragrant zzinnia?
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| Re: Leap by robs_remains |
19-Dec-02/6:47 AM |
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Haunting/quite touching, An inconclusive ghost story 'tim burtonesque' in style
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| Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/8:50 AM |
You have many a string to your bow, and this split the arrow,
bring The hooded man the maid
(applause from the sherriff and nottinghams peasants)
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19-Dec-02/8:56 AM |
Klingon to it, i like it
I vote 1 for my joke and 7 for your poem
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| Re: Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle |
19-Dec-02/8:59 AM |
'Maimed' for the perfectionist in you. this strong piece should not be weakened by spelling errors now bend over boy !
WHATTTEEEEEEESH !
the 1st 4 lines stanza 2 are awesome. 7-
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| Re: Trust by hobojo |
19-Dec-02/9:15 AM |
I dont always vote on the whole poem and this one by you is a classic example why.
Stanza 1 nothing wrong with it.
its a bit generalistic and wishy washy from there.
However I wrote a whole poem last week around 2 lines i wrote from a poem 10 years ago, it was well received on here so just remember all the poetry you write is good because you write it, the key is finding the path to peoples empathy and originating a unique style that people buy. Anyway happy holiday hobojo, 0 votes fly around on this site like tears in a pram its not bad ---5
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| Re: the feeling was never there by blackball |
20-Dec-02/4:43 AM |
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Distinctive,poignant a fine read -8-
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| Re: The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus |
20-Dec-02/4:44 AM |
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I gotta love ya ! wonder how many kids twisters spawned?
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| Re: When Im Gone by New Life Drug |
20-Dec-02/4:45 AM |
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| Re: DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO |
20-Dec-02/5:13 AM |
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a good poem but marred by interruptions while reading due to the grammar, spelling. I too have been damned for the same wrong, not bad -6-
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| Re: The Dance by Quarton |
20-Dec-02/5:17 AM |
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A thoughtful piece of lit, well done sir.
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20-Dec-02/5:24 AM |
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Sustained mood and well composed, albei more style than substance, good poem and welcome to p/r -7-
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| Re: THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO |
20-Dec-02/5:26 AM |
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Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
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| Re: THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO |
20-Dec-02/5:26 AM |
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Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
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