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Leap (Free verse) by robs_remains
There she is again. I can see her as plain as day.
Does she see me? Hmm, she almost walked right through me.
If I only was in that dimension, it could be like that
moment all the time.
But, then, the anxiety, the uncertainty.
She could come here if she would only look harder,
to see the other streams.
I should not try, even to pull her to my world.
Imagine the pain it would cause us both.
We might as well be three thousand miles apart.
Still her smile can cut through the currents that
separate us. I won't forget the day we met briefly.
Will she?
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3618
Posted: December 18, 2002 12:51 PM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2002 12:51 PM PST
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