Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	21-Dec-20/6:41 PM
well written, great imagery
Re: The Song I Miss by Miggy	21-Dec-20/6:44 PM
One line sticks out as not fitting the song, I think: disliked "Yet since this rotted bad"--Liked all the rest!
Re: Weened by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/4:32 PM
Some good lines, a TON of anger...
Re: Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/4:33 PM
Cutesy. Villanelles are not easy...
Re: Beah Richards by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/4:34 PM
Lovely
Re: Horror Film by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/4:35 PM
Well written, sadness staining every line...
Re: Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/4:35 PM
Very cute!
Re: A FERAL PHASE FOR THE POET by daggatolar	22-Dec-20/4:39 PM
The word I think is perpetuity, not perpetuality-- if trying to coin a new word, unnecessary, annoying- some good lines-
Re: Rock of the Earth by ingwa	22-Dec-20/4:46 PM
Some good lines, I like the idea captured. No comma after "Hunts gone by" I think- some clunky lines: "experiences, good and bad"- some very good lines: "sing to my soul of ages gone by" and "Ageless you stand, tall and proud/ Lichen grows upon your surfaces"; uneven rhyme scheme does not help (1st and 4th lines in first stanza, 3rd and 4th lines in 3rd stanza, no rhyme in last stanza.
Re: Rock of the Earth by ingwa	22-Dec-20/4:46 PM
Some good lines, I like the idea captured. No comma after "Hunts gone by" I think- some clunky lines: "experiences, good and bad"- some very good lines: "sing to my soul of ages gone by" and "Ageless you stand, tall and proud/ Lichen grows upon your surfaces"; uneven rhyme scheme does not help (1st and 4th lines in first stanza, 3rd and 4th lines in 3rd stanza, no rhyme in last stanza.
Re: Ghost by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/4:50 PM
Some beautiful lines, good ending, like how you carry the idea throughout the poem, the speaker believing the person who killed herself is so much better than he is, right to a very bitter end.....
Re: Days of Silence (197-392) by impert&ent	22-Dec-20/4:58 PM
Reads like headlines but it gripped me all the way through. Love how "Tom" lines and "Mary" are interspersed here and there. You would not think such a poem would work but I think it does! Enjoyed this! Remembered reading some of these...it engaged my thought, had some humor, did make me think! Enjoyable.
Re: A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis	22-Dec-20/5:00 PM
Annoyed by so many misspellings. If they were deliberate, they were not useful. Some interesting ideas, imagery
Re: There was . . . by baphomet	22-Dec-20/5:05 PM
(stampede of cattle, not stamped of cattle) Cannot conceive of how a wave "suede"s- swayed? What? Oversized- one word- aftertaste, one word. Do your proofreading before submitting. " a cornucopia" not an cornucopia. "What we'll do tomorrow? Not "What will do". Too many errors detracted from enjoying the poem.
Re: Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner	22-Dec-20/5:06 PM
Annoying
Re: The benefit of being realistic by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/5:07 PM
Compact, good!
Re: Sold by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Dec-20/5:08 PM
I found this uninspired
Re: you turned me evil by baphomet	22-Dec-20/5:09 PM
Not bad!
Re: Queen Of The Ring by baphomet	22-Dec-20/5:25 PM
Annoying you are using Hsiwej = Jewish backwards Also, so many spelling errors get annoying to read
Re: Why You All Suck by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	22-Dec-20/5:57 PM
made me laugh!