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Sold (Free verse) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
The sign had been there
for quite a while before
I realized that you were
not. A reminder that
held me fixed in a running
car with no place to go,
but around the block.
I wondered, briefly, if I'd
thought you were joking
when you said "You'll
wake up one day and
find that I've moved on."
I was a fool to think we
had the time to think.
There is nothing as side-less as time.
There is nothing further from the truth;
Then the way I need to miss you until
I can need nothing, but the distance.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4166665
Weighted score: 6.0356665
Overall Rank: 1235
Posted: April 23, 2004 8:48 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2004 8:48 PM PDT
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