All we know
we obsessed with many things
such as love and death
mortality and immortality
destiny and eternity

some of us might find life
as a sentence .." life is my agony "
i shoud say
the death is path of our freedom
but i am still dwelling in my sadness
sheding tears upon the darkness
grasping the hands of lonliness
and murmuring the words of emptiness

i like the way his poem is ..it's a avant garde poem ...i will give it more than 10 score

yeah it has the simplicity of his imagination into the concept of a flat earth

Wilco this is a nice poem ..

Dovina
some poeple said before i said
they said the different things
they opened different secerts
they had taken different ways
the all things which they got
they passed by their souls to different lives
now do i have them in my soul ?


have i lived thousands lives ?
and i exprienced too many ways of life

it's still unknown for many of us
but i want to go beyond what they got before us

some of them fathomed the unsaid things in soul
that can be sensed just between souls

Dovina ...live by this poem

The morning wind spreads its fresh smell
we must get up and take that in
that wind that lets us live
Breathe before it's gone

Dance, when you're broken open
Dance,if you've torn the bandage off
Dance , in the middle of fighting
Dance in your blood
Dance, when you're prefectly free

your poem is interesting to me ..there is sadness in your poem
i can feel it ..............
i know what's behind these lines .. i know the images cant be words
if it can be ...it will be other side where i think worlds and worlds will be lost there ....

I can't explain ...i passed the borders of words ....
so dont ask me why ...but i love what you have written down
because your poem {a thing i must do } meant a lot to me ..Dovina
...

yeah it's a good poem......

yeah u are right ....thank u for ur comment

Thank daggatolar For comment on this poem :
I think you are right , i agree with you....