Re: I still love you by Prince of Void |
5-Apr-05/9:12 PM |
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Re: a comment on Suicide..... by *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* |
20-Feb-05/2:48 PM |
All we know
we obsessed with many things
such as love and death
mortality and immortality
destiny and eternity
some of us might find life
as a sentence .." life is my agony "
i shoud say
the death is path of our freedom
but i am still dwelling in my sadness
sheding tears upon the darkness
grasping the hands of lonliness
and murmuring the words of emptiness
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Re: a comment on Conjugate the verb by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
20-Feb-05/2:18 PM |
i like the way his poem is ..it's a avant garde poem ...i will give it more than 10 score
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Re: a comment on spherical by Patsy |
20-Feb-05/2:14 PM |
yeah it has the simplicity of his imagination into the concept of a flat earth
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Re: a comment on For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco |
20-Feb-05/2:04 PM |
Wilco this is a nice poem ..
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Re: a comment on I AM NOT CONTAINED BY THIS UNIVERSE by Prince of Void |
20-Feb-05/11:01 AM |
Dovina
some poeple said before i said
they said the different things
they opened different secerts
they had taken different ways
the all things which they got
they passed by their souls to different lives
now do i have them in my soul ?
have i lived thousands lives ?
and i exprienced too many ways of life
it's still unknown for many of us
but i want to go beyond what they got before us
some of them fathomed the unsaid things in soul
that can be sensed just between souls
Dovina ...live by this poem
The morning wind spreads its fresh smell
we must get up and take that in
that wind that lets us live
Breathe before it's gone
Dance, when you're broken open
Dance,if you've torn the bandage off
Dance , in the middle of fighting
Dance in your blood
Dance, when you're prefectly free
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Re: I AM NOT CONTAINED BY THIS UNIVERSE by Prince of Void |
19-Feb-05/9:19 AM |
I AM NOT CONTAINED BY THIS UNIVERSE
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Re: a comment on Lust, and the Sad Soul by woodstock20000 |
7-Feb-05/11:24 AM |
your poem is interesting to me ..there is sadness in your poem
i can feel it ..............
i know what's behind these lines .. i know the images cant be words
if it can be ...it will be other side where i think worlds and worlds will be lost there ....
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Re: â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦. by Prince of Void |
7-Feb-05/11:07 AM |
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Re: a comment on A Thing I Must Do by Dovina |
3-Feb-05/11:53 AM |
I can't explain ...i passed the borders of words ....
so dont ask me why ...but i love what you have written down
because your poem {a thing i must do } meant a lot to me ..Dovina
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Re: My concept of existence by Prince of Void |
31-Jan-05/9:11 AM |
not related to my poem ?!
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Re: a comment on Can't Fight No More by jroday |
26-Jan-05/5:27 AM |
yeah it's a good poem......
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Re: a comment on Life is my agony by Prince of Void |
23-Jan-05/7:38 AM |
yeah u are right ....thank u for ur comment
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Re: peeper's envy by That One |
29-Sep-04/11:20 PM |
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Re: a comment on Diaries of tears by Prince of Void |
28-Sep-04/10:18 PM |
Thank daggatolar For comment on this poem :
I think you are right , i agree with you....
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Re: Leaving and Coming by Spindle |
14-Sep-04/8:30 PM |
i think it's good i like it.... honestly speaking
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Re: Leaving and Coming by Spindle |
14-Sep-04/8:27 PM |
i think it's good i like it.... honstely speaking
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Re: Solitude by Dovina |
13-Sep-04/6:52 PM |
I love the word solitude...u know there is a short-film called "depth of solitude" in that film i really get the depth of solitude ..and its concept was wonderful
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Re: save by calliope |
13-Sep-04/11:15 AM |
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Re: staring contest by FreeFormFixation |
13-Sep-04/11:13 AM |
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