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Life is my agony (Other) by Prince of Void A sentence â¦.â Life is my agony â
But? My whys
The Pain of yours
All Perhaps endless requiems for our tears
Terminating us in this silence of unsaid side
And dreams canât go on
The Emptiness is poisoning us
On last monument of awareness
I am sorry â¦maybe I am not understandable
Thatâs my art
Thatâs my beauty
Thatâs my voice in the void
Rightâ¦I am wrong
Canât make me right
I must be wrong
I must despairs
To myself
Hurting my mind
Take my own happiness down in nothingness
Itâs hard to keep this poem in your mind
Because I am a sad drunk man without drinking wine
Passed you as I am not seen
Yep itâs really mixed up
Itâs chaos of beauty
Things has no end met each other here
Full of grammatical problems
Its ocean canât be in one empty glass
Up the ladder:
For Lauren
Down the ladder:
Life
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Posted: January 22, 2005 9:12 AM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2005 9:12 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10255 Comments:
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Dovina @ 205.184.70.141
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22-Jan-05/1:27 PM
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Oh, for God's sake get over it! Have another drink. Write another poem. Go for a walk. Do something! This sitting around feeling sorry for yourself, well it's selfish and wrong. If I were on the stool next to you I'd buy you a drink.
"I must despairs" is intentional for the second to last line?
Definitely conveys a sense of hopelessness.
yeah u are right ....thank u for ur comment
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