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Pointless like many things (Other) by Prince of Void
My false vision’s rebuilding a new world In the pursuit of happiness the day decays But I found nothing yet in this doom of eternity Still in my illusion of recreating myself Lost in the doubt under moldering skin of my desires The despairs of creation within the tears In my last solitude suffering is my point of view The loneliness of nothingness inside the body of …. It’s all in my ultimate emptiness The fears of being and will not be forever It’s pointless to think …in these endless despairs

Up the ladder: connect the dots
Down the ladder: Life is my agony

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10270
Posted: January 12, 2005 11:02 PM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2005 11:02 PM PST
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