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Climax (Free verse) by Shade_dreamer
Climax Finally arched back scream blood roiling mind reeling All scences heighted Here is the place where lovers part Here is the place wild fantasies start Toung whip Teeth knives probing for more sighs Vision narrow helpless weak held fast by desire Rose oiled sent melded with passions sweat warm naked flesh Legs shake uncontrolled lust sigh moan Climax Finally arched back scream Mind clouded body tremble arms weary here is the place slave of desire skin afire pounding heart ragged breath no way to resist dark fantasies dreams beckon soft touch smooths your hair soft lips kiss your sweat soaked brow you are released you are free sandman beckons

Up the ladder: mass on key
Down the ladder: What is the use of the lid?

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10300
Posted: January 16, 2004 6:52 AM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2004 6:52 AM PST
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