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An Old Friend (Free verse) by Dovina
I see youâre still tall
after rain and mud
holding firm
where you where born
May I recline with you again
rest in your cool shadow
your harmonized song
with the Breezy Blue-jay Band
Whenever I come
your tough hide,
gentle touch
and soft breathy words
alleviate the pain
A faithful refuge
in spite of your wounds
Giving is you
shade though sunburned
protection though broken
Summer will be hard
Good to see you, old friend
Letâs talk again soon
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10273
Posted: April 13, 2005 6:44 AM PDT; Last modified: April 13, 2005 6:44 AM PDT
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