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March (Free verse) by the_poetess
cobble stone walkways to heaven line the street on this day that the sun is shining nobodies sad, and everything can be seen clearly after all of those dreary shadows we're out like a lamb

Up the ladder: fucked up dream
Down the ladder: Pointless like many things

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10261
Posted: April 6, 2005 9:53 AM PDT; Last modified: April 6, 2005 9:53 AM PDT
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[5] Dovina @ 12.72.8.237 | 7-Apr-05/12:31 PM | Reply
Nobodies are sad. You probably didn't mean that, but it's good.
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