| Re: God's Angels by _iamtwilight_ |
21-Feb-04/4:03 AM |
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| Re: Inevitable by _iamtwilight_ |
21-Feb-04/4:01 AM |
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| Re: A Dream by DarkThirteens |
21-Feb-04/3:59 AM |
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| Re: Troubled Mind by DarkThirteens |
21-Feb-04/3:58 AM |
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I don´t know what to say actually!
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| Re: First Shot by lastobelus |
11-Feb-04/9:53 AM |
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Thank you for your comment, I can say that was better!!! But about your poetry: I can also write stories you know. You maybe think that it´s poetry, but I don´t. A little less story telling only. You can try to write a book, can´t you?
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| Re: Gardener by lastobelus |
7-Feb-04/9:50 AM |
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I got to agree with you. People can write what they want, and people can comment what they want. Maybe an idea is to write what is wrong with the poem, what you don´t like. This is what kind of critic I would want, and I guess other people to. Some people are just cruel for the fun of it. And that´s not wright!
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| Re: Castaway by andrewjthomas |
7-Feb-04/9:41 AM |
I don´t know. What about you?
Even if I have personal poems, I write about my feelings. What is important to me. I really don´t care what´s important to you.
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| Re: La Belle Epoque by andrewjthomas |
4-Feb-04/9:26 AM |
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Isn´t this a story? It´s a reason that they call a poem a poem and a story a story. Did you get that?
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| Re: Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy |
10-Oct-02/2:43 AM |
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This must be a song... you're a great songwriter... You should show somebody your talent, cause this was really great.
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| Re: Not Again by Brennan |
10-Oct-02/2:40 AM |
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| Re: Nature by Reuben Spiteri |
10-Oct-02/2:37 AM |
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Good poem.... I liked it a lot...
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| Re: Essential Love by unknown |
10-Oct-02/2:36 AM |
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Very good poem... you must have been in love when you wrote this?
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| Re: The Fragrance by mozac |
9-Oct-02/1:46 PM |
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I have no peticulary meaning about it, I't's okey I guess.
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| Re: Deceive Me by A.S.Martin |
9-Oct-02/1:45 PM |
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Okey enough... I didn't get a rythm or not a rythm, it was a little bit humpy.... but the text easn't bad at all.
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| Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/3:55 AM |
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I know alot about poems, so if I were you, I wouldn't say something foolish, beside I'm not a child.... But I guess you are since you critize people when you don't know a damn shit about them. If I were you I'd take a minute to think about what you're saying, and a poem can't be a story, it's a reason it's called a story and not a poem.
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| Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/3:41 AM |
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Oh my God, what are you to talk about good and bad poems? You don't know shit.
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| Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/3:36 AM |
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Excuse me, but this is not a poem, it's a story. Silly isn't it? A poem is not a story.... I thought you knew that, you who knows so much, huh?
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| Re: rapping on caffeine by blackball |
9-Oct-02/3:28 AM |
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I liked, it was a short poem, but it said so much.
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| Re: The right one by dngrules |
9-Oct-02/3:22 AM |
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Nice poem, I guess I've felt this way myself once....
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| Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore |
9-Oct-02/3:08 AM |
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Not bad... Kind of deep.... I like it
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