| Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/3:36 AM |
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Excuse me, but this is not a poem, it's a story. Silly isn't it? A poem is not a story.... I thought you knew that, you who knows so much, huh?
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| Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/3:41 AM |
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Oh my God, what are you to talk about good and bad poems? You don't know shit.
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| Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/3:55 AM |
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I know alot about poems, so if I were you, I wouldn't say something foolish, beside I'm not a child.... But I guess you are since you critize people when you don't know a damn shit about them. If I were you I'd take a minute to think about what you're saying, and a poem can't be a story, it's a reason it's called a story and not a poem.
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| Re: Deceive Me by A.S.Martin |
9-Oct-02/1:45 PM |
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Okey enough... I didn't get a rythm or not a rythm, it was a little bit humpy.... but the text easn't bad at all.
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| Re: The Fragrance by mozac |
9-Oct-02/1:46 PM |
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I have no peticulary meaning about it, I't's okey I guess.
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| Re: Essential Love by unknown |
10-Oct-02/2:36 AM |
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Very good poem... you must have been in love when you wrote this?
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| Re: Nature by Reuben Spiteri |
10-Oct-02/2:37 AM |
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Good poem.... I liked it a lot...
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| Re: Not Again by Brennan |
10-Oct-02/2:40 AM |
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| Re: Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy |
10-Oct-02/2:43 AM |
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This must be a song... you're a great songwriter... You should show somebody your talent, cause this was really great.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Feb-04/9:23 AM |
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| Re: La Belle Epoque by andrewjthomas |
4-Feb-04/9:26 AM |
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Isn´t this a story? It´s a reason that they call a poem a poem and a story a story. Did you get that?
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| Re: Castaway by andrewjthomas |
7-Feb-04/9:41 AM |
I don´t know. What about you?
Even if I have personal poems, I write about my feelings. What is important to me. I really don´t care what´s important to you.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Feb-04/9:45 AM |
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I write a lot of poetry. But I´m not so sure about you. I can take critic. But what you write is not critic. It´s just being cruel by the fun of it... So if you can´t write real critic, don´t write at all! Okay????!!!
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| Re: Gardener by lastobelus |
7-Feb-04/9:50 AM |
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I got to agree with you. People can write what they want, and people can comment what they want. Maybe an idea is to write what is wrong with the poem, what you don´t like. This is what kind of critic I would want, and I guess other people to. Some people are just cruel for the fun of it. And that´s not wright!
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| Re: First Shot by lastobelus |
11-Feb-04/9:53 AM |
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Thank you for your comment, I can say that was better!!! But about your poetry: I can also write stories you know. You maybe think that it´s poetry, but I don´t. A little less story telling only. You can try to write a book, can´t you?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Feb-04/9:57 AM |
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gee??? Yuck??? Something like that, or what??
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| Re: Troubled Mind by DarkThirteens |
21-Feb-04/3:58 AM |
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I don´t know what to say actually!
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| Re: A Dream by DarkThirteens |
21-Feb-04/3:59 AM |
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| Re: Inevitable by _iamtwilight_ |
21-Feb-04/4:01 AM |
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| Re: God's Angels by _iamtwilight_ |
21-Feb-04/4:03 AM |
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