on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2004, 8:30 PM
Absolutely FANTASTIC, The first stanza grabbed me. You know the myth of the sparrow's song? If not, all the better. Sweet. Is there only ten on this scale???
on An Arrow and a Knife by blues
2 Nov 2004, 8:52 PM
Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
on Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17
2 Nov 2004, 8:56 PM
DAMN Cuddly one. Tis the best yet, in my humble opinion. A light bright enough? BRILLIANT! Yes!
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2004, 9:00 PM
A well written argument, from the point of the unborn. Perhaps Ed and the rest of the world will realize the life lost someday. Of course you will grow and change, but you already have a better moral code than most. Stay Strong.
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2004, 9:02 PM
KE? You need to borrow a dime? ok, but you know pay phones are fifty cents now don't you?
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2004, 2:09 PM
A passage worth perusing again. I enjoyed this.
on leaping into loss by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 1:57 PM
At the mention of concrete, my perception changed right away. At first I imagined this in the mountains or something. Well written and profound. It has an interpretation all it's own for me.
on behind the mirror by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:01 PM
Been there!
on corrupting me by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:03 PM
ouch
on scarecrow saviour by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:00 PM
WOW! guess I'm stuck here for a while. Well Done.
on take it easy by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:02 PM
Probably more worried about the transition.
on corrupting you by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:04 PM
Made me chuckle, actually.
on A Spring bird in November (Edit) by Sasha
10 Nov 2004, 11:17 PM
I especially like the comparison,unclear roads...
on Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge
10 Nov 2004, 11:19 PM
No
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2004, 11:24 PM
Does she know you are comparing her to spiders and ants? 16 huh?
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2004, 11:31 PM
My parents raised me the same way, Only hipocracy from my mother now tho'. It's funny you should say treat your neighbor as yourself, I'm thinking of naming my business D.U.O. Services. Do Unto Others.
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2004, 11:37 PM
Great, If there is one thing that jumped out at me,it would be s.4 l2, Delete "it".
She... Must have seen you weep
Deep behind hind the willow tree
Where you watched her toss her hair
And it made you wish she cared
She... Must have seen you weep
Deep behind hind the willow tree
Where you watched her toss her hair
And it made you wish she cared