regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-04/8:30 PM
Absolutely FANTASTIC, The first stanza grabbed me. You know the myth of the sparrow's song? If not, all the better. Sweet. Is there only ten on this scale???
Re: Two Years by berdabear	2-Nov-04/8:33 PM
I can feel the echoes of your love in the words you have written. Thank you for sharing them.
Re: Ash by horus8	2-Nov-04/8:37 PM
Very well done Hoarus, I truly enjoyed this piece. It reminds me of my dad's favorite poem... I pass by a poor old farmhouse, It's shingles broken and black. Good Imagery
Re: An Arrow and a Knife by blues	2-Nov-04/8:52 PM
Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
Re: Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17	2-Nov-04/8:56 PM
DAMN Cuddly one. Tis the best yet, in my humble opinion. A light bright enough? BRILLIANT! Yes!
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-04/9:00 PM
A well written argument, from the point of the unborn. Perhaps Ed and the rest of the world will realize the life lost someday. Of course you will grow and change, but you already have a better moral code than most. Stay Strong.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-04/9:02 PM
KE? You need to borrow a dime? ok, but you know pay phones are fifty cents now don't you?
Re: leaping into loss by skaskowski	7-Nov-04/1:57 PM
At the mention of concrete, my perception changed right away. At first I imagined this in the mountains or something. Well written and profound. It has an interpretation all it's own for me.
Re: scarecrow saviour by skaskowski	7-Nov-04/2:00 PM
WOW! guess I'm stuck here for a while. Well Done.
Re: behind the mirror by skaskowski	7-Nov-04/2:01 PM
Been there!
Re: take it easy by skaskowski	7-Nov-04/2:02 PM
Probably more worried about the transition.
Re: corrupting me by skaskowski	7-Nov-04/2:03 PM
ouch
Re: corrupting you by skaskowski	7-Nov-04/2:04 PM
Made me chuckle, actually.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Nov-04/2:09 PM
A passage worth perusing again. I enjoyed this.
Re: Knives by SwiftFox	10-Nov-04/11:15 PM
It's a good thought,Really good. But I think you should think it through further. Expand, expound, eh?
Re: A Spring bird in November (Edit) by Sasha	10-Nov-04/11:17 PM
I especially like the comparison,unclear roads...
Re: Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge	10-Nov-04/11:19 PM
No
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-04/11:24 PM
Does she know you are comparing her to spiders and ants? 16 huh?
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-04/11:31 PM
My parents raised me the same way, Only hipocracy from my mother now tho'. It's funny you should say treat your neighbor as yourself, I'm thinking of naming my business D.U.O. Services. Do Unto Others.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-04/11:37 PM
Great, If there is one thing that jumped out at me,it would be s.4 l2, Delete "it". She... Must have seen you weep Deep behind hind the willow tree Where you watched her toss her hair And it made you wish she cared