regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-04/4:04 PM
I feel the same way about so many people, but I find it's the little things I can do which seem to make the most difference. This poem strikes chords in my heart. It's not the best I've read here, but it has a special meaning for me. Thank You.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-04/4:13 PM
Going thru' the graveyard in Stole Kansas?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-04/4:16 PM
FANTASTIC, I just tried my first acrostic the other day, check it out. Loved this.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-04/4:19 PM
Something about the snow and blue salt? Repititions from the previous one of yours I read. I liked it better.No particular reason, just seemed to flow better in my head.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-04/4:22 PM
Did she win?, Or saving herself for another day?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-04/4:33 PM
Try to rework it, I like the content well enough, but it sounds broken when I read it.
Re: Flying things by INTRANSIT	27-Sep-04/1:36 PM
Where ya bin? Haven't heard from ya in a while. Thought maybe you drove your truck to Cuba or something. How'd you get the plane down at the chicken farm?
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-04/7:02 PM
Welcome to the world. I can't believe you'd do anything worth getting yelled at tho'. Good expression/vent.
Re: Nothing's Forever by cuddlytiger17	8-Oct-04/7:03 PM
Nothing like a nice hot shower huh?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Oct-04/7:24 PM
Stanza 2 line 3, Eternal bliss, ?? Only if we're lucky--- I mean worthy. Can you say dead? Probably in a more poetic manner. A good message tho'. Are any one of us truly ready? I think my dad was. Heck I know he was. But I'm a long ways away from being that good of a man. Still; I can hope that I inherited it.
Re: For Ike by INTRANSIT	24-Oct-04/7:29 PM
Sometimes the carbon copy smears, and these are the things we are left with. It's funny, man, I was listening to the radio when I read this, and they were playing Ace In The Hole, by George Strait...
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Oct-04/7:35 PM
DAMN, Dan Damn. I need say no more.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Oct-04/7:43 PM
Well, hell! I was going to give you advice. But now?...
Re: Transposed by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Oct-04/7:54 PM
Just stopped by to return the favor. If it's any consolation I don't care for your collection of meaningless shit than you do for mine, but I don't take the time to log in to my multiple personalities and give you more than one score. Just one, from me. I have seen a few things in your words that have made me stop to think, but you aren't running a really good race in life. I'm not a psycologist, but if you are really the way you are, you need one. he he heee...
Re: What is a poet by INTRANSIT	26-Oct-04/8:53 PM
So true. the part about the poison. Hey , do me a favor, read my poem into my world, acrostic. Tell me what you think. It made it to the top ten in less than a week. But personally, I think it's kinda weak.
Re: the coming of Fall by Sasha	26-Oct-04/8:57 PM
This rings home for me. I've been asked to come cut down some trees from the Hayman burn area on the Eastern slope Of the Colorado Rockies(Just about 50 miles from my home). Turns out I used to picnic where these people are building a house.
Re: Turbulence by horus8	27-Oct-04/6:31 PM
Here you are again with anoyher f******n 0 on my poetry? I don't make five suedonimmmes of myself to give you hateful scores. WHY?>
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Oct-04/7:08 PM
I'll red it letter
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-04/8:24 PM
Very well written, and a good reminder to us all. A good thing to consider. Thank you for the refresher course. Nice to see more Catholics on Poem Ranker, for a while there I was all alone.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-04/8:27 PM
And so He dies His ignominious death, or am I mistaken?