poemranker ::20 most recent comments by sliver (121-140)

Comments bysliver, 121–140 back. Include replies

on One Perfect Moment by Leah11 4 Sep 2004, 11:23 AM
Only one? I hope there are many more to come.
on Game Play by Leah11 4 Sep 2004, 11:24 AM
Yes, we will. But hell, I like games of chance.
on Down With Ingenuity by Dovina 4 Sep 2004, 11:31 AM
Can I be on your cabinet? I haven't tried politics yet.
on Crazy about you by nicole081083 5 Sep 2004, 4:38 PM
Actually, my eyes are blue-green.
on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2004, 4:46 PM
Sometimes it's easier to just let life pull you along, just keep your sights ahead and you can use your mind and soul as a kind of rudder to direct you.
on dying love by singinkygal 5 Sep 2004, 4:48 PM
Sometimes separation is the only avenue.
on Like A Rainbow by jasondingus 5 Sep 2004, 4:50 PM
Why can't she be the yellow and you the blue, or maybe purple?
on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2004, 4:51 PM
Sounds like a keeper Dan.
on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2004, 4:53 PM
Maybe you should find a different motel?
on Edges by Blue Magpie 5 Sep 2004, 4:57 PM
I have enjoyed this immensly, and you danced around many of the edges I walk in life. Well written, well thought out. Definite-10-
on A Poem by BigB 5 Sep 2004, 5:01 PM
I would have to agree w/ Dovina, The crappy title makes me expect a crappy poem, You have a good image here, but you need to knead it a little more.
on The Little Merman by avery 5 Sep 2004, 5:08 PM
Yea, umm, no. kinda lost it somewhere around the third stanza, or was it the first?
on Isadora by avery 5 Sep 2004, 5:10 PM
What is wang zhenghui?
on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2004, 5:12 PM
Some men can. Be careful who you drink with!!!
on Adorasi by avery 6 Sep 2004, 10:16 AM
I believe this describes Renee as well.You must really like Isadora eh? Emotions tamed in words where spirits can't be trapped.
on some deleted poem 6 Sep 2004, 10:18 AM
Stanza 5, I would refine. But, well, you know.
on some deleted poem 6 Sep 2004, 4:07 PM
Never read the original,This one makes me wonder. I've printed it out so that I can imbibe it. I'd add it to my favorites, but I want to print those anyway so I can study them and see where I keep going wrong. well done. I'll get back with you. If it takes too long, just remind me. Hell, read one of mine while yer there.
on Lost by arduinn 10 Sep 2004, 3:59 PM
Well, it appears that two of my poems have made their way to Arduinn's favorites list. To what do I owe this fine pleasure? thank you for the compliment!
on some deleted poem 10 Sep 2004, 4:02 PM
The hath just doesn't seem to fit.Replace him with her and I may as well have written this one.
on some deleted poem 10 Sep 2004, 4:04 PM
Good poem Bratsy. If more people prayed to the Blessed Virgin for her intercession, this world might not be such a mess.