Re: One Perfect Moment by Leah11	4-Sep-04/11:23 AM
Only one? I hope there are many more to come.
Re: Game Play by Leah11	4-Sep-04/11:24 AM
Yes, we will. But hell, I like games of chance.
Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	4-Sep-04/11:31 AM
Can I be on your cabinet? I haven't tried politics yet.
Re: Crazy about you by nicole081083	5-Sep-04/4:38 PM
Actually, my eyes are blue-green.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-04/4:46 PM
Sometimes it's easier to just let life pull you along, just keep your sights ahead and you can use your mind and soul as a kind of rudder to direct you.
Re: dying love by singinkygal	5-Sep-04/4:48 PM
Sometimes separation is the only avenue.
Re: Like A Rainbow by jasondingus	5-Sep-04/4:50 PM
Why can't she be the yellow and you the blue, or maybe purple?
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-04/4:51 PM
Sounds like a keeper Dan.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-04/4:53 PM
Maybe you should find a different motel?
Re: Edges by Blue Magpie	5-Sep-04/4:57 PM
I have enjoyed this immensly, and you danced around many of the edges I walk in life. Well written, well thought out. Definite-10-
Re: A Poem by BigB	5-Sep-04/5:01 PM
I would have to agree w/ Dovina, The crappy title makes me expect a crappy poem, You have a good image here, but you need to knead it a little more.
Re: The Little Merman by avery	5-Sep-04/5:08 PM
Yea, umm, no. kinda lost it somewhere around the third stanza, or was it the first?
Re: Isadora by avery	5-Sep-04/5:10 PM
What is wang zhenghui?
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-04/5:12 PM
Some men can. Be careful who you drink with!!!
Re: Adorasi by avery	6-Sep-04/10:16 AM
I believe this describes Renee as well.You must really like Isadora eh? Emotions tamed in words where spirits can't be trapped.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Sep-04/10:18 AM
Stanza 5, I would refine. But, well, you know.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Sep-04/4:07 PM
Never read the original,This one makes me wonder. I've printed it out so that I can imbibe it. I'd add it to my favorites, but I want to print those anyway so I can study them and see where I keep going wrong. well done. I'll get back with you. If it takes too long, just remind me. Hell, read one of mine while yer there.
Re: Lost by arduinn	10-Sep-04/3:59 PM
Well, it appears that two of my poems have made their way to Arduinn's favorites list. To what do I owe this fine pleasure? thank you for the compliment!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Sep-04/4:02 PM
The hath just doesn't seem to fit.Replace him with her and I may as well have written this one.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Sep-04/4:04 PM
Good poem Bratsy. If more people prayed to the Blessed Virgin for her intercession, this world might not be such a mess.