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dying love (Free verse) by singinkygal
One day I loved you, the next it was gone
I used to love your company now I just want
to be alone
I used to be attentive and hang on to every
word
now I find myself tuning you out and have barely listened to or heard
your I love yous your I need yous
How do I tell you what you already know
you've noticed a change in me you told me so
I'm sorry, I can't tell you why
All I know is I have to say good bye
Take care have a wonderful life
sounds so cold those words can cut like a knife
I do wish you well and though we'll be apart
I will cherish the short time you held my
heart.
I did love you
one day until it was gone
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3638
Posted: March 29, 2004 11:05 AM PST; Last modified: March 29, 2004 11:05 AM PST
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