| Re: bonsai by richa |
16-Dec-03/7:06 AM |
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I can see the picture you've painted, but why a hacksaw? What metal is he cutting?
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17-Dec-03/2:18 PM |
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Good emotion, I'll bet they knew how much you liked it.
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| Re: Ongoing by tadpole |
22-Dec-03/9:02 PM |
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Anxiously awaiting more. Good thoughts, eternity is waiting for all
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| Re: Paint Remover by Samantha |
22-Dec-03/9:11 PM |
Masks can be very important sometimes, but you must be able to remove them, or they will become a part of you.
Keep submitting!
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| Re: Friday afternoon Zoo by INTRANSIT |
22-Dec-03/9:13 PM |
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Perhaps because we need more than ourselves to feel alive. I enjoy that zoo (within reason)
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| Re: Words: lost in translation by fair12 |
22-Dec-03/9:18 PM |
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YES! That is how I feel reading Shelley and Wordsworth,and so many others, looking for those velvet words to caress my mind and soul as my own vacant words could never begin to do. Well done nice sentiment. A well deserved 10!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Dec-03/9:20 PM |
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Buy some bright paint, Live a little.
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| Re: You.. by Ariella |
22-Dec-03/9:22 PM |
I went to High School for more than lunch.
(GYM)
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| Re: her treasure by amber1028 |
22-Dec-03/9:24 PM |
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Old memories well remembered, I enjoyed this.
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| Re: 7th one about Jon by Plaidypus |
22-Dec-03/9:31 PM |
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| Re: TRUTH by somemorepoetry |
22-Dec-03/9:33 PM |
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WEEELLL, Thats a reasonable assumption:(
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| Re: My friend over there (the Mirror) by reo316 |
22-Dec-03/9:39 PM |
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Sure they can, you know, they all have their own society on the other side of the glass, when you're not looking they're partying off their ass, Look closer next time.
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| Re: You tell me by Ariella |
31-Dec-03/7:41 AM |
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You can't keep hiding for the rest of your life.
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| Re: Lie by Pervy Elf |
31-Dec-03/7:43 AM |
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And still I search for it, I must be one of those fools they call human.
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| Re: Unchained by Hillarystep |
31-Dec-03/7:46 AM |
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I like it, a well written poem, But Seraphic and manic don't seem to fit.
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| Re: Drinking and driving by SILYLILGURL |
31-Dec-03/7:54 AM |
Been there, stupidity is pervasive when alcohol is involved. Be more specific, discribe the scene, Mangled metal and broken glass, A pool of blood,
A life gone in a flash.
Screaming sirens pierce the air,
Broken dreams scattered here and there.
I'm not a poet, but something like that.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jan-04/8:08 PM |
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You live every day and cannot comprehend paying a price for your sinful actions? Life exacts a toll in a small way, simply with repercussions. Christ's sacrifice paved our way, allowed us to seek and receive forgivness, but only for those who are truly penitent. Great poem Bratsy, even though the pagans (broad translation) can't understand.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jan-04/8:12 PM |
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And now my simple mind will begin to attempt to comprehend, although I'm sure it's worthy of a ten, I will stay my voting hand 'till I truly understand.
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| Re: Ode to the Wolf by Cougarchic |
9-Jan-04/12:50 AM |
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Yesa, they do have fear, ...
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| Re: Broken Love by Cougarchic |
9-Jan-04/12:54 AM |
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Hmm. I've never really felt love, and I thought that was painful, the DESIRE. But I've never had a broken jaw.Owww
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