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Paint Remover (Free verse) by Samantha
I picture me smiling
like i always am
why do i lie to myself
when my heart is crying
you all think i am happy
always has a good face on
when really i cry myself to sleep
dont know how long
i cant keep this mask on
seems like the paint i put on
everyday is running out
the smile is up side down
so when that time comes
when i am no longer able
to give you up lifting advice
no longer able to have that
cheerful face,
no longer able to smile,
wishing i could
but the real me is out
uncovered
it is no longer possible
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
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Posted: December 20, 2003 10:49 AM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2003 10:49 AM PST
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