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Paint Remover (Free verse) by Samantha
I picture me smiling like i always am why do i lie to myself when my heart is crying you all think i am happy always has a good face on when really i cry myself to sleep dont know how long i cant keep this mask on seems like the paint i put on everyday is running out the smile is up side down so when that time comes when i am no longer able to give you up lifting advice no longer able to have that cheerful face, no longer able to smile, wishing i could but the real me is out uncovered it is no longer possible

Up the ladder: Homeland Security
Down the ladder: Bilateral

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7309
Posted: December 20, 2003 10:49 AM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2003 10:49 AM PST
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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 20-Dec-03/12:35 PM | Reply
I often find running over something at a high rate of speed alleviates this sort of tension.
[n/a] Everyone @ 81.128.136.167 | 22-Dec-03/4:01 PM | Reply
I think it's fascinating that people wear metaphorical masks to hide their less sophisticated character traits from society. On the outside, I'm a committed Christian and passionate racist. But on the inside, I'm a trenchant buffoon who likes running into cake shops and pulling down his trousers. Masks are important, aren't they?
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.224.24 > Everyone | 23-Dec-03/8:23 AM | Reply
You run into a cake shop and as one mask goes up another comes down.
[10] sliver @ 63.189.17.188 | 22-Dec-03/9:11 PM | Reply
Masks can be very important sometimes, but you must be able to remove them, or they will become a part of you.
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