poemranker ::Friday afternoon Zoo by INTRANSIT

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Friday afternoon Zoo

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Dec 2003 · Edited 22 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

Every friday we gather, like chipmunks we chatter we honk like geese, rattle like snake tails and bleat like sheep. Why do we not hunker in our nests like little birds do, and flow easy like the harvest wheat.

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3 comments

[n/a] Everyone 22-Dec-03/3:22 PM Reply
Is this a poeme about the hustle and bustle of our hectic modern lifestyles?
[9] sliver 22-Dec-03/9:13 PM Reply
Perhaps because we need more than ourselves to feel alive. I enjoy that zoo (within reason)
[8] richa 23-Dec-03/7:54 AM Reply
This could be a commentary from either side of the cage. (I'm guessing the spectators)